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Raven Cry

Raven Cry

Stars, dark and silent
Shine without light 
Into the temple of Midnight
Worlds collide into one
Mass of the damned 
Entwined with blood cries
Ravens swoop with pain
Into the midnight rain

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Tony Taylor

Hi Laura Devine!!........Dark and compelling........reminds me a bit of Sylvia Plath..........fine sense of timing here too..........I like it............well done my friend.........and Welcome to COSMO!!...........smiles........T  xx

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laura devine

Hi Tony Taylor.. thank you for your read and feed back..

laura

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Valerie Lynn

Love this dark little write! 5*s!

Val ♥️

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Delmayne Seekoei

HEY LAURA PLEASE ADD MORE OF THESE KINDA WRITINGS ...I LIKE IT ROUGH ..MAYNE..

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Welcome to COSMO family, good write, thanks for sharing, my applause, wish to translate your above short poem to my mother tongue, Malayam.

My vote 5 stars

Regards

Williamsji Maveli

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