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FOR MY BROTHER

FOR MY BROTHER

At 27 years old 
You are still my baby brother 
It kills me inside knowing 
I am unable to be there 
To comfort you 
To hold your hand and tell you 
Everything is going to be okay 
I would do anything to help you 
Yet I am stuck here feeling helpless
Why can't it be me? 
I would trade places with you in a heartbeat 
Praying for your life at this very moment 
As you remain in ICU
The tears won't stop and I will never ever stop loving you 

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Tony Taylor

May ALL that is ~ turn your world.........in favor of your Brother............T xo

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Valerie Lynn

Thank you Tony!! You have such a huge heart and I cannot thank you enough for being there for my family at this time!!

With Love,
Val ♄

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sparrowsong

Hello Val...

I am sorry that you and your family are going through very difficult time...

In my thoughts and prayers...

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Tracy Timothy

GOD SPEED UP YOUR BROTHERS RECOVERY VAL X SO SORRY TO READ OF YOUR PLIGHT FOR YOUR DEAR BROTHER ,,...SO SAD.....  I HOPE THAT ALL YOUR PRAYERS ARE ANSWERED VERY SOON XXX

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Valerie Lynn

Hey Tracy!! Thank you for the uplifting comment!! Very much appreciated!! Love to You!!

Val ♄

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Curious Onlooker

My heart and prayers go out to your brother and you, you always have those who will listen
CO

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Valerie Lynn

Thank you CO!! I'm extremely thankful for your prayers!! Much Love!!
♄

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Great write dear Poetess Valerie Lynn, My prayers, my solidarity, I love the below lines,

To hold your hand and tell you 
Everything is going to be okay 
I would do anything to help you 
Yet I am stuck here feeling helpless

Regards & prayers,

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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Valerie Lynn

Thank you for the prayers Williamsji!! I'm very grateful for all the support!!

Val ♄

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Flower Girl

Hi Val.....a Lady with a sacred beautiful heart and soul.......I'm a bit emotional but I leave you with luving thoughts......lots of luv......many hugs and prayers for you and your brother......may the Lord touch you both with miracles today.....luv ya xo :)

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Valerie Lynn

Hello beautiful Flower!! Thank you for the loving thoughts and prayers!! I do believe in miracles :) love ya too!!

Val ♄

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Brenda Keough

So sorry angel....my prayer is out to the universe to guide him back to you and his beautiful life....too young to leave .....miracles are possible. ...

Love and hugs

Giggles the Poet

Love and hugs angel

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Brenda Keough

Hello beautiful angel thinking of you in this time. ..my prayers are always with you for your brother's recovery.....miracles do happen....as they will...may this be so....I put this prayer out to God my father and our great universe to pull him back with passion for living ....he won't let go....let this be so great father in heaven

Love and hugs angel

Giggle the poet

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Valerie Lynn

Hello sweetheart!! I too believe in miracles!! :) Thank you for your prayers!! I truly appreciate you taking the time to leave this comment for my brother!! Much Love to You beautiful!!

Val ♄

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COSMOFUNNEL Team

Hi valley,

Cosmofunnel team wishes a miraculous and  speedy recovery for your brother.

God bless.

The Cosmofunnel team.

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Valerie Lynn

Aww Cosmofunnel team!! I cannot begin to say how much this comment means to me!! Thank you so much for the wonderful words of encouragement!! Thank you!!

With Love,
Val ♄

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D Washington

Amazing write, I can only imagine the strength it takes to express the thought and feel in this poem.

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Valerie Lynn

Thank you D Washington!! The words just kind of came pouring out...I just wanted him to know how much I love him. :)

Much Love to You!

Val ♄

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Devon La Porte

Hey val I do not know what your going through but my prayers go out to and your family, I hope your brother will be okay. I really feel the true sibling love in this poem well done God bless.

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Valerie Lynn

Hi Devon!! Thank you for your prayers!! That is so very sweet and kind of you to leave me a comment!!

Val ♄

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Valerie Beasley...

Val!  Beautiful write.  I, had a baby brother which I couldn't get to at the time.  He did call me to say that he couldn't fight the illness and that he was tired and ready to step into a new life.  There isn't a day that goes by that I don't miss him.  I know that Kevin is just fine now.

val xox

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Valerie Lynn

Aww Val! I am truly sorry for your loss. My sincere and deepest condolences to you!! Much love sweetie!! Happy to have you back!!

Val ♄

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Valerie Lynn

Hi Mark!! Thank you for the 5*s and your heartfelt comment!! :)

Val ♄

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Delmayne Seekoei

VAL MY FRIEND YOU HAVE SOMETHING I LONG FOR SERIOUSLY I CAN READ AND READ YOUR WORKS FOR HOURS YOUR AN AMAZING WRITTER, THE WORDS THE EMOTION I HAVE TO AGREE WITH MARK I'VE FELT IT TOO THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST I'VE READT IN MY WHOLE LIFE 5 STARS IS NOT WORTH IT FOR THIS ONE,,ITS TEN FROM MAYNE VAL..KEEP THEM COMING MY FRIEND...   WELL DONE ...MAYNE

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Valerie Lynn

Hello Mayne!! Thank you for the comment. You just lifted my spirits and I truly appreciate your kind and inspirational words!! Much Love to You!!!!!!

Val ♄

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Stephanie Iyavu

HI very touching, pray God will give you and your family strength during this time of darkness.Do not lose faith in God, he is a prayer answering God. He sees your heart, how much you love and care for your brother. He is the healer  divine, continue praying . 

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Valerie Lynn

Hi Stephanie! Thank you for your lovely words of encouragement!! Your kindness is truly appreciated!! Much Love!

Val ♄

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Nardine Sanderson

Hey Beautiful sis, I hope with all my heart that all is well ❀ so sorry for not being around, love always nardine xox

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

I read your verse many times, this is one of your great writings, love it Regards

Big Willy

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

I read your verse many times, this is one of your great writings, love it Regards

Big Willy

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