Poem -

Damaged Petals And Jagged Thorns

The soil from which we have all grown,
Has long been spoilt, don't you know,

From roots that used to shoot for moons,
To the seeds they sow through evil deeds,

We see the leaves that bleed for green,
But they hide the woods between the trees,

From mighty trunk to tiny stem,
If you look inside you'll find a friend,

Strong we stand to fight the storm,
Though firmly planted, sway back and forth,

To see our beauty we have to force,
For we are damaged petals,
And jagged thorns.

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sparrowsong

Hello Halo...

Very sad and true...

It didn't have to be this way but, we are followers of those who did...

It's one thing to be different it's something else to not be better...

We have people constantly following and if we're a wreck and if we're ignorant how can they be better?

Though I do see they're some amazing kids out there, we can hope they stay that way...

It all depends on the influence...

Adults make the kids...

​​Great write!

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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Halo Pain

Thank you for your insightful comment sparrowsong, yes sad but true.Β 

I appreciate you reading and sharing your thoughts.Β 

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S.zaynab.kamoonpury

Evocative poem, superb musing and comparisons wow. Unique and amazing poetry indeed. Kudos.

Soo nice to read from your inking again, Pleez do review/comment/add your thoughts on my newest poem too.

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Halo Pain

Thank you very much for reading and sharing your thoughts.Β 
I will do

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Halo Pain

Thank you very much appreciatedΒ 

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