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Explode up

Explode
politics explodes into arguments
Vegans explode over animal cruelty animal rights as if theirs a law written about them 
White men explode over being called races black man explode over unfair treatment causing wars   
Country's explode over weapons all leading back to politics it burns away at society inbedding  iits evil thoughts and opinions into are tiny brain cells so we can kill eachother with are not so free will meanwhile your going around fixing gasleaks stoping us all from explosions and poisoning what a bonkers world full off explosions

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Tony Taylor

Hi SPIKE!! (cool name)......I like the subject matter you chose here... after my second read through  I found the poetic timing and rhythm that you have employed here.... it's VERY compelling poetically..... like ~

        ~ "White men explode over being called racist
            Black men explode over unfair treatment causing wars
            Countries explode over weapons all leading back to politics..."

If you format this piece a little differently it will help your reader..... it's REALLY VERY clever poetry and is quite insightful as well!!......ALL STARS!!..... well done dear poet sister!!.... and.... in case no one has said so......WELCOME to COSMO!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo : )

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Spike Graves

Hi thank u but have. Been on b4 just forgot old password thank u

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Tony Taylor

OK cool SPIKE!!....I didn't mean any offense just
Trying to be helpful..... hope you have a blessed day!!..... Smiles : )

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