Poem -
twirls + twirls
Now that I'm dead
I feel the world differently he says
From above? I ask
You wish he laughs
You love the snow he says
Watching it fall
From a cosy warm room
White covering all
Think the joy of those moments
Nothing more nothing less
The peace that you feel
When you know you are blessed
I turn around to catch him
But he tells me he's gone
The snow twirls and twirls
Blows itself on
M
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This is beautiful, Marion. As always, you express sadness with such beauty that one cannot help
but to see the beauty first. B
Hi B...thankyou so much x
White Winters and Black Hearts. A Lovely Poem of Love and sorrow. Nice Write.
Thanks so much Jac x
An Incredible emotional turn around, how clever to bring it down from above, and what a wonderful concept, original as you have ever been. I love it. 🌹
Thankyou Shirley, I'm sure you know from your own experiences these conversations are very real. There is definately a realm we can't perceive I think. Many hugs X
I love this poem. I love the message it gives. I love the words that bring this snowy scene to life xx
I'm glad you like it Tina... i was unsure about posting it as these conversations are very real to me lol...I await the men in white coats( is that even a thing anymore😀) thanks love xx
Who is to say they are are not real? I believe that spirits talk to us after death— in many different ways. The poem is beautiful and I am very glad you posted it xx
I agree wholeheartedly. Judd has never left me. And I do so love being able to write his name so...
thankyou. Lots of hugs 💕
I truly believe that Judd is still with you ... and he always will be. And I bet he loves seeing you write his name and say his name. When my mum died she told me that she was able to be with us all, me, my sister and my dad and grandchildren, all at the same time. She also told me that there would be more grandchildren and that she will be with them too. She was happy. It wasn't a sad thing. So yes, I do think that Judd is with you ... bless him ❤️ xxx
What a comfort that is Tina to know you too have had communications with your mam. Did you visit a spiritualist or simply hear her
I am so glad you have had that experience and I hope it is an on going one 💞
It was in a dream, Marion. About 3 days or so after she'd died. It was more than just a dream though. She was standing at the foot of a signpost which said nothing, at a cross roads. She had her beloved dog with her. She spoke to me but her words went straight past my ears into my heart. She also said that it was her HRT treatment that caused her death. She said she had been very tired and God saw that she had needed a rest. She also said some other stuff but said I wouldn't hear the words until the right time. And all these years later sometimes things happen and I realise ...oooh, mum told me this only I didn't hear it then. I woke up from that dream feeling a lot happier than I had done since my mum had died. So, no medium. Also ... when I was young and my mum very much alive, we once talked about death and she said to me that if there was an afterlife she would find a way to contact me xx
That is a beautiful experience and must comfort you greatly. I too have experiences Tina. Thankyou for sharing that... it brings more comfort than you can know xx
Hugs ❤️ x
Melancholy personified and deftly done, the words a mixed bag.
But so well done.
A pensive write Marion but so well delivered in what is expressed.
Hugs to you also.
Shaun x
A beautiful thoughtful and very much appreciated comment Shaun...thankyou ...and welsh hugs to you and yours x
Back to read more of yours later tonight and others...you know playing catch up.
Eternal catch-up! and catch you later :) x
Simply hopeful well put, the uncertainty of what comes after this life and yet, I still think that we all live multiple times, so the Soul can learn to become human. I'm just sorry that sometimes the need to learn hurts so bad (even today I was crying for having to live most of this life with the hand brake on, luckily my wife got it unstuck in time for some twenty years driving smoothly). Hanx for helping all of us here with your words🙏😎😇
John I'm deeply sorry you have suffered so much...truly. And I think from the beautiful words you always write about her you are also truly deeply blessed to have such a wonderful partner in life. Thankyou my friend... hugs x
Yes, I was lucky finding the wife and thank you for your regrettings, it brought me my "children" so I am glad life went 👆instead of 👇 and it brought me Cosmo❤️🎈🎉🎊 as a consequence of all the writing