Poem -
Festering
Courageous dinosaur!
Hear vibrating roar?
Cedars of Lebanon,
Any to tread upon?
Kindness and harmony,
Chances to be free!
All these go extinct!
Evil! thus hate is linked!
Instant gratification!
Social disintegration!
Christians try ministering!
Intolerance, festering!
Discipline out the door!
Tears! we are no more!
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Comments
Sometimes it all feels rather pointless Jim...I hear you x
thank you for the support Marion! I haven't given up, thus the poem. hugs!
thank you Dominic!
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Your words have so much soul, Β so much feeling, Β I sit here thinking for a while after I have read .Β
your are an amazing poet Jim !Β
thank you so much Carol Anne!
thank you bunches sparrowsong!
Wow this is fab and sublime. Instant gratification is a social evil and lack of discipline is bad too. Kudos for this well written poem.
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
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thank you!
Nice emotive write Jim.βοΈ
JP
thank you JP!
awsome poem
thank you awesome Greg!
Gosh Jim I think these days so many are feeling this. Itβs as if the world is going to wreck and ruin. A powerful and creative piece x
thank you Gwen!