Poem -

wild heather hills

never did find

any loneliness lurking

in trees the seascape
The wild heather hills

only found it in people
crowds drinking pints
in weddings in funerals 
in you dad despite

loving you 

M
 

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Shaun Cronick

To contemplate on loneliness Marion, is a human minefield and mind field and a hopeless task.
For nothing good comes of it, nobody wants to be forgotten or unattended.
I say nothing good, unless, a person, a human being, has been through the wringer, exploited by one or others who are no more around.

A fearless poem for all now to view and perhaps catharsis for yourself.
Hugs to you Marion :)
Shaun x

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Marion

Hey Shaun... thankyou so much for a truly indepth reply... you shine! Hugs x

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Rory McGinlay

Ouch, M. 'despite'  being the operative word 

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Marion

Perfect R... you got it in one... thankyou x

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Being Me

Being alone and being lonely are two very different things, as your poem, here, suggests to me x

 

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Marion

Lived my whole life being lonely for my dad...usual story Tina repeated in families a trillion times over... that's what I'm writing here... and I thank you so much for reading dear friend x

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Marion

No... thank YOU for reading Wilford... appreciated x

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