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A wise man once said..

A wise man once said..

A wise man once said: 'difficult roads lead to beautiful destinations'
'A true love will surpass all creations'
Even if the love is uncommon
So damned and so forgotten
Utterly impossible, forbidden
That it has to stay inside, hidden
It shall provoke a held-back tongue to jot
Or else hidden thoughts will start to rot
A bulging mind won’t take another blow..
..of the force that makes what's hidden grow
Drums will beat in your ears until they start to bleed
They won’t stop until they're freed
You've pushed it away
Ignored it day after day
But one day it'll get to you
Maybe slowly, maybe out of the blue
Then you won't be able to hide..
from the love that somewhere inside you bides
You'll have to succumb, go through..
..let go and do
..everything and anything it tells you to

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Ian William

Superb! You've unleashed an insightful and wonderful piece, while speaking of unleashing insight and wonder within.

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Angel

Excellent angel

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Hardrocklover

an excellent piece of writing , love hurts and we move on to find someone who has loved us all along, happy holidays to you and your family , rock

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Silent Dreamer

Thank you so much Rock! And wish you and your family happy holidays as well! 😊🌟

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๔๒lคภкק๏гtгคเt

So damned and so forgotten
Utterly impossible, forbidden
That it has to stay inside, hidden
It shall provoke a held-back tongue to jot
Or else hidden thoughts will start to rot

the image , your words and omg the music, need I place the archaic swords of Vikings around my already bleeding heart....

What's that Indian instrument that mixes into the melody , is it the sitar? 
It's intoxicating first time hearing it and I desperately need it to be on my list of musing without words...

Please share with me the link for this piece...

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Silent Dreamer

Your words are always so beautiful! Thank you so much😊

Yes it's the sitar indeed, but the guy playing the instrumental uses a piano to create its melody. Sitar definitely has one of the most magical sounds😍

Here's the link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AMFDeuPwEpg

 

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Silent Dreamer

Ah wow Hindi! 😊 Shukriya (thank you), you are a beautiful soul yourself. Bless you too!🌺

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Ella H

Wow! well done! Just loved it!

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Sarah-lou

Oh my!!! Goodness!!! I'm blown away by this beautiful write, it moved me to tears. Thank you for sharing this. Followed looking forward to reading more of your work. Xx

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Silent Dreamer

Aww I’m really flattered and appreciate it greatly! Thank you so much for your kind words💖 

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