Book

There is sadness in my heart, in my soul
There is an endless yearning to be whole
I feel so desolate when everything seems fine
I break down crying most of the time
Friends and family ask why it is this way
I respond with a shrug having nothing to say
My life seems in perfect order to those who look
But I write my feelings and thoughts in a book
If I let any one read what I had put in there
They would understand this constant despair
I thought I could figure out why I am like this
But that is just the way it has been and is !
I know that I need to talk to others like me
They, alone, can restore my faith in reality !
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Hi Poet/Honorable A.O.M
After the greetings,
Your above poem refers, I wish to appreciated and feature this via my POET'S PEN with your kind permission
Depression can show the way to emotional and physical troubles. Typically, people with depression find it hard to go about their day-to-day activities, and may also feel that life is not worth living. Gloominess, also known as major depression, clinical depression or major depressive disorder is a medical illness that causes a constant feeling of sadness and lack of interest. Depression affects how the person feels, behaves and thinks.
This can lead to emotional and physical problems. Typically, people with depression find it hard to go about their day-to-day activities, and may also feel that life is not worth living. I liked the below lines
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thank you so much for asking. Of course you have permission ! Can I take this opportunity to say what wonderful comments you leave inspiring other writers ! :)
Dear Richard Waters,
I am so much attached to COSMO, I wish to feature and translate poems to my mother-tongue, my life time, I have dedicated to poetry, hence I support each and every one, thanks for your understanding and love
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thank you so much for letting me know ! What a wonderful aspiration, inspiration and motivation you have !
such a terrible feeling depression leaves that sometimes we don't feel a way forward...and you are so right that talking to others with the same illness does help .... more than any doctor etc ....good piece Richard <3
Thank you for these insightful and gratifying remarks ! Best wishes to you, as always ! x
<3 keep rising ! :)
I always try to !!! :)
beautiful poem.... says so much and has no much feeling.. the rhyme sets up a rhythm thats accending and hypnotic... i like immensely
Thanks ! :)
Richard, I really enjoyed "Book". I don't put it as well, most of the time, but there are many of us with, "Our Books". Very, Very well said. I really enjoyed it and more important, "I think(believe) I understand. I pity those who don't. Be Well!
Thank you for your kind words ! :)