Poem -
Break up
If I could I would die tomorrow
For the most part my heart is full of sorrow
For you are gone my love
My soul is dead;I've had enough
If only I could get you out of my head our love story would come to an end.
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Hello Yuridia,
A well written piece of your heart, (bled), from your very emotionally endowed pen and placed so sincerely by you, on this canvas of sorrowed thoughts.....Love is never lost, just misplaced, (for the moment), be the moment, long are short but once again and in due time, it will truly be replenished and in its sacrad replacement, (caution), will be the primary concern of the once broken heart, (when carefully), you commence to selecting another love.......Just as Leola has stated, you are an awesome writer/poetess and did a wonderful job in writing about and away, your sorrows in this poem. Just as they conglomerated within your heart, so have you captured and placed them, (your delicate emotions), within this powerful collection, of words found in this poem....
Take Care,
Jim.
Thank you so much. I am honored to be called a poetess.
Yuridia,
A beautiful write.
(I especially loved the final line)
~Rob