Poem -
Broken
A spark of insanity,
With no shred of humanity,
Swims in those crystal blue pools,
Twinkle, sparkle like a jewel,
A certain spark,
Shadowed by dark,
Eyes, that could kill —
And will,
Masked by an identity,
A foreign entity,
Who has biting remarks,
Expensive cigars,
Yet, I charmed,
Completely disarmed,
By her aura — Golden,
I realize she’s broken.
Comments
What we see in other people can really frighten us yet inspire us to write.
Great write hazel.
Thank you! It’s often our perception of a person is not the entire picture, but a fragment.
Holy crap that’s a good contestant fr the win beautifully wrightin absolutely love that one..i think it’s spose to be “an identity”
Thank you for the comment and love for the poem it’s much appreciated. I didn’t see a contest entry with the theme of “an identity” I am not sure what contest your talking about. I only know about February’s contest.
Lol no I’m sry i was pointing out in your poem u wrote “ a identety “ I belive its pronounced “ an identety “ because of the vowels clashing
I hadn’t noticed that, until you spotted it. Thanks 👍
Your very welcom I often .. very often make spelling and grammar errors I’m amature and think I might take some sort of wrighting corse lol