Poem -

Defeated

Defeated

Consumed by disappointment, 
She cries herself to sleep. 
Awakening to the same feeling, 
She cries, 
Repeating the cycle of defeat.

 

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Cherie Sumner-Taylor

Awww....That is such a rough place to be....Disappointment usually eventually leads to change that is necessary and brings things around...but it can make one feel defeated for sure while they endure the cycle that needs a chance to be broken. Great sad write, sis.  xo   

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Larry Ran

My Dear Lauren,

The loss consumes her
Defeated she ever weeps 
Day to night to day

All my love,
Larry xxx
 

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kay harris

Wow so powerful in so little words, I love this, it hits you hard when you have been there. much love friend.. 

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