Poem -
die young
he's a very sick man
from now until he die's
the disease is what will kill him
i'm telling no lie's
the drink's in his system
killing him slow
rotting his inside's
alcohol blood it flow's
night in pain
day in daze
see his image
see his gaze
dark haired and gorgeous
he was in his time
drink ruined his body
and feature's so fine
why he does it
nobody know's
alcohol abuse
is the way he will go
swollen inside
liver failure it came
but drink continue's
that he won't blame
a warning for all
as i watch him die slow
this is not the way
"YOU" want to go
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Hi Tina I wrote one on the same theme (sortof) a while ago might put it up its called crossroads I thinks this is more hardhitting and better x
thank you williamsJi i am trying to get that message across as my ex my youngest father this is him now.it was wrote about him a while back.he did'nt listen at the time thank you best wish's tina
thanx susan and aye put that poem in .any message that gets across write it tina
Good poem to address the deadly disease of alcoholism and bring awareness to this issue.
thank you lolita i hope a message gets through to someone on this best wishs tina