Poem -

Dream sea

Dream sea

Like a coral swaying with the tide
A tiny fish swimming against the stream
In the depths of the sea i want to hide
Forever sleeping in this cold dream

Waves crashing against my fins
The salt water pricking my eyes
Trying to wash away my sins
Feeling the ocean consume my lies

Drifting deeper in the blue sea
Whispering goodbye to the moon
Smiling up in glee
Knowing i will meet her soon

Nina

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Tony Taylor

Hey NINA!!
There is a longing and ebbing loneliness expressed in this very well crafted A,B,A,B rhyme scheme....... delivering the idea that there is something waiting for us beyond death itself....... that living in the here and now is difficult (at best)........ well conceived and VERY well conveyed!!.......ALL STARS!!....... well done dear poet sister!!...... and......WELCOME to COSMO!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!........T xo.  : ) 

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Moongoddess

Hi Tony!
Thank you very much for the compliment, means a lot (:
xx Nina
 

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