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Fading To Black (any name suggestions?)

Fading To Black (any name suggestions?)

The inevitable has come,
Knocking on wooden door,
I open to succumb,
To fall onto floor,

Black.. Mysterious, radiating cold,
Death marches in,
I knew this had been foretold,
From end to begin,

Chokes the life, from crippled being,
Time ticks,
Life fleeting,
Given Deathโ€™s icy kiss,

I free fall into oblivion of doom,
Blackened soul rise,
Body restโ€™d in fancy tomb,
I meet my inevitable demise,

All that remain,
Is Deathโ€™s reign.

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Silent Dreamer

Beautifully dark write! Loved it๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿฝ

Gerard McGowan

I love this dark portrayal, death has always been a fascination of mine, not knowing what happens. I've a lot of respect for death And I hope to welcome him into my life rather than unexpectedly meet him.

Great poetry Hazel.

Terry Kay

Hazel, admirable write.ย  I loved it.ย  Terry Kay