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Frenzied Heated Rush

Frenzied Heated Rush

Before you ever take my hand 
To lead me to that place - 
Love's magic land of no return
I already feel the chemistry
The succulent kiss of sensual spree
The implied seductive merry-go-round
Our imminent bedroom sounds
By our sexual bantering tone
I excitedly anticipate
The emotions rising to a plea
The expectation of how high I will be
Once your are completely inside of me
Feeding my insatiable desires
Surrendering to your sexy essence
To be in love's controlling presence
Consumed by your pleasurable prowess

Before a single tentalizing touch
In my mind's foretaste
I am already in the 
Frenzied heated rush  
  
 

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Lorna Caizley

Hi Cherie, Your more sensual poems are filled with such desire, yet always still keeping class
Great poem. 
Lorna :D xxx

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Cherie Sumner

HI Lorna...I am so relieved that you said my erotic poem keeps class, because I think about sex so very sentimentally and with reverence.....I don't like raunchy portrayals of sex...Love is always at the heart of how I want to relate the scene....a desire to be one in all ways....with intense passion to stir the emotions as well as the flesh's cravings.  I have not done a sexual poem in awhile and thought I would remind readers that I have not forgotten the reputation I have for them...but I like to challenge myself with many themes... Thank you for giving me confidence that I can write  tactful sensual poem....lol  Bless you...Love n Hugs, xo  

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Tony Taylor

Hey C!! .....you're right!.... that picture does look a bit like me in my younger days!! ~ smiles!!......I Love that you wrote this about me as an ego stroke!!...... when the fact is..... that most of this poem occurs before anything actually happens that I'm intimately involved in......I hate this poem!!.......😊.....just kidding!!......I agree with Lorna...... pure 'class' all the way through!!...... FISTFUL-O-STARS!!......LOVE it!!...... big kisses!!.......T xoxxxx 😉☀✴✳♥♥♥♥♥♥

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Cherie Sumner

Hey Sweet T.....Lol...So you think I wrote this to stroke your ego?  Well, if it did, then that is all good!  I wanted to write this tastefully....When you love someone, you feel passion well up inside you .....long before they ever even touch you...the excitement is there....I can just look at you and feel overwhelmed with emotions of love and craving to be held.  That passion is always there...Love you...Kisses...xoxxx C

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Leah Cabael Yodico

Wow!! X rated poem on Cosmo///a kind of aphrodisiac// one of the best steamy romance poems I've ever read so far here on Cosmo..

hugs
Leah 

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Cherie Sumner

Hi Leah....Lol...Thank you!  I am always a little hesitant to post poems that are more erotic in nature....simply because I do not want to come across as dirty...I am very sentimental and appreciative of sensual love and intimacy...and I don't want it to come across as crass...but in a loving relationship....I am relieved that you say it is one of the best steamy romance poems you have read on here....Whew!  I feel better knowing it is received the way I intended...with romance at the heart of it....Thank you!  Love n Hugs, xox Cherie  

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David King

Love this poem classy and sexy iv thought of attempting something similar but I always talk myself out of it lol but you did s great job enjoyed xo

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Cherie Sumner

HI David...I love the passionate genre....You should challenge yourself and try one...I am always hesitant and shy about posting the more erotic ones, but I have found that people tend to really want me to write them.  I am even working on a story to publish that will have a bit of romantic theme to it....I am happy you liked my passionate write and that it came across classy...Thank you.... xox   Cherie

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Christopher Correia

excellence in execution in the art of erotica, sis, painting a scenario without the use of graphic, cliche' words that throw water on the fervent heat of passion, your intelligence, imagination and ability to 'look outside yourself' is such a 'pure' talent you have, writing with conviction and lots and lots of heat, here....John Updike is my favorite writer and this man can craft the most sexually graphic scene without the use of vulgarity, not an easy thing to do....you should write more of these, 18 +'vignettes' you are quite good, love the 'detailing' ...truly this is high quality work, cheers premier poetess 

'The implied seductive merry-go-round
Our imminent bedroom sounds'

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Cherie Sumner

Hey Chris!  I have not done one of these more subtle erotic poems in awhile and wanted to be sure I had not lost my touch.  I am very pleased that you say it is not cliche or graphic...because I really want to be different and not come across as trashy.....but present intimacy in its finest passionate loving nature....a natural desire and consummation between two....You quoted the two lines that worked on and changed the most to try to create imagery in the mind..I am ever thankful for your kind support.  Means so much... Bless you....((hugs))  xo Cherie

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Cherie Sumner

HI Carey!  Lol...I used to write more passionate writes....Maybe I should spark that part of me to do more...hmmmm...by your reaction it is encouraging...Thanks. xo Cherie

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