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His Mind is a Beautiful Galaxy

His Mind is a Beautiful Galaxy

His mind is a beautiful galaxy
Filled with celestial stars
In meditation’s saturated grace
He conjures colors of Renoir
An impressionistic masterpiece
With intellect, unequivocal
A patent privilege to behold
God’s gifted original

He devotedly disappears
Behind a curtain of Divinity
A mysterious metaphysical world
Within his soul’s vicinity
My spirit’s recognition quickens
An entranced essence to his call
Begging my energy to enter
Into his spiritual dance hall

Where he and I serve a reserved purpose
In life’s great unknown
Yet, destiny’s forthright guiding hand
Never abandons us alone
Both aware, that we share a connection
Driven by the Divine
Such passionate astrology
Intertwined in God’s bloodline

I sense it in his time-keeper’s kiss
In his eyes of fire with galactic gleam
The emotional momentum’s rise
Ties our souls, riding on ionic beams
Tethered by mystery, entrenched in trials
Ever closer in our conjoined quest
Two’s truth in trenchant swords
Comes carried high in love’s behest

I vie to view his mind’s unveiled vision
Where God’s precise life in us aligns
His mind is a beautiful galaxy
Stretching beyond universal confines
  
*For Tony...On our first year wedding
                   anniversary.   

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Tony Taylor

Holy Cow C!!......I am always amazed at how well you know me....I suppose I shouldn't at this point in our relationship...... but my relentless search for answers through my metaphysical research is a driving drumbeat that you captured so beautifully here......I am so happy to find these words on our 1st anniversary.... and although I've seen a version of this before..... this beautifully edited version shines......I am so proud of you honey!!.....Thanx so much for this!!..... and for being the love of my life!!...... Hugs-n-Kisses!!...... PINNED for all the obvious reasons...... and for the stellar use of poetic license!!...... All My Love!!...... Tony 🐧❤❤❤❤🐧💋

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Cherie Sumner-Taylor

Hey T!  Happy Anniversary!  I am glad you like the changes I made.  When I think about who you are, I ALWAYS think of your metaphysical mind and your search for God and all things spiritual....To me, a poem about you without that aspect would not do you justice...lol.  Your intellect and curious nature are two of your most admirable qualities to me.  I hope the future brings you much healing in your health and good things with your music recordings.  You deserve so much recognition for your talents in writing and music.  I smile when you say you are proud of me.  Thank you.  Much love, C 
 

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Syd

A beautiful poem by you too Cherie. Happy anniversary to you both.

- Syd xo 

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Cherie Sumner-Taylor

HI Syd...Thank you so much.  This year has flown by!  When I think of Tony, I always think of his love of all things metaphysical first and foremost, for who he is.  I could have written many different aspects of him, but I feel his spiritual pursuits best represent  the heart of who he is.  Thank you for your kind wishes.  I appreciate it.  xo ;)

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RRG (Rebecca)

A very passionate and romantic write. Congratulations to the both of you. What a wonderful gift Cherie. Blessings to many more happy years together.

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Cherie Sumner-Taylor

Hi Rebecca. Thank you.  This year has just flown by!  Tony and I met right here on Cosmo in May of 2014....It started as a friendship and transitioned into a long distance romance that seemed impossible with distance hurdles and Tony's health challenges.  But God always has a plan. Thank you for your kind blessings.  xo ;)

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GREG TUCKER

You two get a room already lol! Oh you got a house?  Close the curtains then!  Seriously love your devotion to one another.  It is rare, exquisite and highly inspirational! Love you both!

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Cherie Sumner-Taylor

HI Greg. Lol.... Yes, we got a house, with curtains.  Lol  Thank you for your kind support.  Means so much!  This year has just flown by!  We love you too, my friend. xo ;)   

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Flower Girl

Wow Cherie.......your words are so magical......you’ve brought beautiful visions in every verse.......written not by thoughts but your sacred luv for Tony deep within you......it felt as if I was watching your spirits soaring with Eagles among the stars......I'm actually lost for words to express the impact of your luv you’ve written so beautifully......thank you for taking me along with you on your magical journey of luv......purple luv & hugs xo :) 💜

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Cherie Sumner-Taylor

Awww..Thank you, dear friend.  You have known me and T since the beginning of our relationship....and been such a guiding force.  When I think of Tony, it is his metaphysical journey and spirituality that stands out, and I wanted to show that side of his personality. I am glad you found my write as a magical  journey.  Your support and precious friendship means so much to me.  Thank you for your beautiful text messages today wishing us Happy Anniversary.  You are the best. Love n Hugs, xo ;)

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A Lonely Journey

Cheerie, 
That was such a gorgeous, loving sentiment. You're an amazing writer, and human being. I hope you are the happiest person in the world(oh sure, garner all the '(blank) in the world' honors! Including 'Nicest Person In the World, and 'Most Creative Person In the World', etc., etc., etc. Don't worry about us having any! LOL. Kidding, you deserve those awards). 
Great write!! Happy Anniversary! 
Love, 
Matthew.  

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Cherie Sumner-Taylor

HI Matthew!  Thank you. Tony is very much into metaphysics and the pursuit of spiritual awareness.  I wanted to write something that represents his original personality.  You are very sweet to send me wishes of happiness and anniversary wishes.  I don't think I am the most creative person in the world, but I do like all things creative and like to try to be different. Thank you for appreciating my work.  Bless you.

Love n Hugs, Cheerie  

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Angel

Beautifully written angel 

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Cherie Sumner-Taylor

Hi Linda....Thank you.  This past weekend was our first year wedding anniversary, and I wanted to write something that expresses who Tony is...and his wonderful journey dabbing into the metaphysical aspects of God are definitely his personality.  Thank you for reading and commenting. ox ;)  

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Larry Ran

Our Dear Cherie and Tony,

Sending you all our love, on your first of countless Anniversaries.  In this beautiful poem, you have created a masterpiece, that your beloved Tony will ingest every word, and feel your never ending love.  I will make a meager attempt to respond poetically, and hope I can portray but a fraction of the love that have you.

His galaxy surrounds me
I travel to the stars
So brilliant, like his mind is
He sets my most romantic bars
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On this day, our first Anniversary
I honor him, I thank our God above
For at last, sending me my Soulmate
To forever share our love

All our love,
Linda and Larry xxx

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Cherie Sumner-Taylor

Thank you, dear Larry!  We appreciate the kind anniversary wishes!  Your poetry always makes a beautiful summation and correlation to my work!  I wish I could have used your verses to put in a card to Tony...This year has just flown by.  Thank you for your kind wishes.  Love n Hugs. xo

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