LET US UNDERSTAND THE DAWNS

(this poem has 249 lines and 1551 words ... please go through and let me have your views)
Let us open the eyes of consciousness,
Let us start having awakened thought-process-
We will have to get up and advance,
We will have to throw out negligence -
Let us move on⌠let us move onâŚ
When we learn to look
A curtain cannot be an obstacle
When we keep tearing layers
Matter will be available
Let us get out of wrong viewing,
Let us imbibe good viewing-
Let us move on through the place
Where unwithering aspirations can be found,
Let us move on through the space
Where undying ideals can sound-
Let us move on⌠let us move onâŚ
Hatred is venom let us not spill that,
Cheating is danger let us quell that-
Let us destroy violence,
Let us determine happiness-
Let us procure the feelings of the distressed people,
Let us secure the notions of delighted people-
Pouring blood shall narrate a story
Let us listen to that,
After burnt out something will be apprehensible
Let us take note of that-
Let us extend our hands to remove stains,
Let us employ our minds to reinstate compassions-
Let us invite cordiality that has escaped from our houses,
Let us recall holiness that has gone with bygone days-
Let us have tenderness in our tendencies,
Let us write a history that is quarrelless-
Let us blend sharpness in our inhalation,
Let us send righteousness through our exhalation-
Let us run and run to declare that we do not recline,
Let us cut stupidity and dislodge it from our lane-
Let us roam in the world without fear,
Let us do some favours to the person near-
Let us scan the problems,
Let us discover proper solutions-
Even anguish has got a tone
Let us listen to that,
Every dispute will have a colour
Let us wipe off that-
Let us allow the birds of our aims to fly
In the open air of opportunities,
Let us draw a picture of satisfaction
On the canvas of our hearts with ambitions-
Let us upkeep standards in the process of transformation,
Let us try our hardest to promote perfection-
Let us take rest amid struggles themselves,
Let us enjoy our own responsibilities-
Let us waive off weapons,
Let us wield letters-
Not only blind faiths
Our opinions too have harmed us
Let us endeavor to over- look all the opinions,
Let us earn knowledge and enhance our perceptions-
Let us move on⌠let us move onâŚ
Let us chit chat with the rains,
Let us have discussions with the snows-
Let us offer hospitality to the heat,
Let us serenade to the evenings-
Let us observe the shine of the darkness,
Let us touch the elegance of the brightness-
Let us live without diffidence,
Let us be jubilant without reluctance-
Let us cultivate reforms,
Let us distribute relationships-
Let us cleave defeat,
Let us surge as success-
Let us communicate with tears,
Let us console and peal some pains-
Let us have penchant for things which cannot be purchased,
Let us give high status to things which are not sold-
Let us smash menaces,
Let us preserve fineness-
Though it is being uttered by very many people
A lie cannot be a truth
Though it is known only to a very few people
A truth cannot be a lie
Let us investigate intellectually,
Let us have our observations scrupulously-
Let us wear youth always,
Getting stagnant is but senility
Let us keep that away by all means-
Let us move on⌠let us move onâŚ
Ups and downs will be there in the path
Let us carry out our journey properly,
Curves will be there in the motion
Let us touch our destinations straightly-
Not with sentences let us go on with impressions,
While noise stops music will flow let us give our ears-
Let us pave the ways with ideas
Those are not caught by language,
Let us reach the places
Those are not ushered by words-
There are some lyrics which can quench our thirst
Let us search and pluck them,
There are cradles in some deserts
Let us swing along with them-
Let us float on unentrancing waves,
Let us obtain garlands in unfading gardens-
An unformed star beseeches âI want gleamsâ
Let us deliver our duties without retardation,
An unconstituted object is hunting for dwelling site
Let us be prepared to go ahead with determination-
âStill that flame had not ceasedâ when this was said
âIs hunger its name?â question was asked
Plenty of buds became victims to hunger
Let us begin to cease the flames,
âWhirl wind blowsâ when this was said
âIs cruelty its name?â question was asked
Like a cureless wound cruelty torments
Let us guard our friends form the whirl wind-
Even now sects are considered
Let us erase our distortions,
The invasions of isms do not end
Let us not yield to dismays-
Along with science absurdity also developed
Let us achieve relief through sagacity,
Because of speed our aptitudes were damaged
Let us decipher solace from perspicacity-
Let us move on⌠let us move onâŚ
Sickness does not disappear by shouting
Let us be constructive,
A corpse will not demand food
Let us be corrective-
Errors are interpolated in education
Let us not get strayed,
Our culture is tottering
Let us get protected-
Let us bring out revolutions to dethrone sins,
Let us bend our life styles to establish virtues-
âA termite-affected bookâ
âThat is but the societyâ all have said
Let us capture what we have lost,
âA detached aspectâ
âThat is but calmnessâ all have said
Let us install the requisite-
Let us see the sea in our bodies,
Let us contain courage and attract others-
Let us approach the sun,
Let us get fit and win-
Let us collect and compile some sacred secrets,
Let us record hidden messages from dead creatures-
Let us renounce depreciations,
Let us announce only appreciations-
Let us rectify ourselves,
Let us fructify our lives-
Let us choose finesse,
Let us trace auspiciousness-
Entertainments are enticing
Let us not be trapped,
Egos are hovering over
Let us not be wrapped-
Let us move on⌠let us move onâŚ
CommentariesâŚcommentaries⌠we do have plenty
Subjects are not being manifested
ExplanationsâŚexplanationsâŚthey are countless
Our doubts are not being cleared
Let us study accurately,
Let us absorb fittingly-
Geniuses have arrived
Intelligence has been scattered
What has to happen has not happened
What has to be adopted has not been adopted
Let us fill the blanks,
Let us fulfill our necessities-
How many splits can we have?
Let us not get spoiled further,
To what extent can we fight?
Let us not fall from the level higher-
Nicety of a river is flow of water
That is streaming for us
Let us have nicety,
Let us proceed with prosperity-
Kind deeds of the earth are trees
They grow for us
Let us have kindness,
Let us be precious-
Great decisions of a plant are the flowers
They blossom for us
Let us make great decisions
Let reside like fragrance-
Let us move on⌠let us move onâŚ
We have to set aside disparities urgently
Without fail let us register unity,
Each nation has its own notability
Nothing wrong let us generate internationality-
The thunder is sharing some information let us receive that,
The lightning is imparting some advise let us grab that-
For unrequested queries
Given answers are poems
Let us subsist as poems,
Rightness is a carved sculpture
Let us carve our natures-
Our taste promotes fuss
Let us review our preferences,
A wail cannot provide melodiousness
Let us have propriety in its place-
By gazing at scenes glances get ablaze
Let us reanalyze the civilization,
Attractions do bother us
Let us shatter the deceptions-
Changes are unstoppable
Changes are unchangeable
Let us get used to changes
Let us have rejuvenescence-
Silence too is a note
Let us lend our voices to that,
Meditation too is singing
Let us apply our musings to render it-
Unknown arts also have their greatness
Unrevealed talents are there in abundance
Let us acquire the required wealth,
Let us conserve our desire like health-
The breeze flowsâŚ
Perchance the nature would have smiled
Let us emulate the breeze,
The sky has formedâŚ
Perchance the divine grace would have had its spread
Let us apprehend the sky-
Perhaps the universe must be sorrowing⌠the night has come
Let us have our days without nights,
Dirt of corruption has erupted heavily
Let us not get inglorious-
Let us move on⌠let us move onâŚ
Let us refine our existence,
Let us redefine our presence-
On the dais of brain
Let us convene cultural programs,
Occasion may procreate difficulty or probability
Let us behave like artistes-
Our dreams are multifarious
Let us act instantly,
Realities are embellishments
Let us wear them abundantly-
Only with zest let us be alive,
Zeal will help us let us thrive-
Let us treat this birth as gain
Let us be born once again-
Let us move on⌠let us move onâŚ
Come on, continue and flourishâŚ
Come on, improve and relishâŚ
Let us understand the dawns!
Let us emerge as new human beings!!
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Comments
Greetings Rochish,
You really place some thought in this one....Very well delivered and no stones were left unturned nor element of life forgotten.....Removal of the fabric of our lives that separates us yet conceals us with essence of our protective privacies in life not spawned from torture and greediness of mankind being able to be one with all of life and that which sustains life living not for one but for the better of all mind kind. An introductions of solutions stamped out eradications of problems not only with the will of mankind but with the depletions placed upon the preservation of our world as a whole solutions not found in war but in the opened minds and hands of our people in all places and in all things. The replenishment of our depletions of what once belonged to our mother earth and father universe take pride in compassion put forth answers and takes back corruptions. The existence of all depends not through social nor technological status but through one hand reaching through the curtains of our lives to take the hand of not only another but instead all others. The sheer essence of our winds, our waters, our air, our trees, our survival as a people. Depends solely on the reproductions of we the people and the steps we take and not the mistakes we continue to makewe are one war is not the answer though it has spawned itself into the for front of our being of survival. A poem of the world for the as seen from behind and in front of the shields weâve placed amongst us. Day turns to night  night into Day but between all there exist our dawn and imagine what can be accomplished with the usage at its entirety for all that lives and will live in life to come for humanity and the replenishment of our worlds dwelling and all its living elements at hand. For every question their exist an accompanied answer not any answer or explanation fabricated by man but the true answers offered to us by the universe as a whole. Stands by all should be taken to conglomerate and Praise the constitutional righteous and condemn sepretist,that which praise and worship the wrong The riddles of our universe lay not trickery to the minds of man but is laid out plain as our day, for everything there exist a river and like everything it will shape its coarse and as long as all is serene, polarized and as one it will continue on with its uninterrupted  journey through and throughâŚWe hold the key to the answers of our worldâŚlets unlock a better and brighter tomorrow in our new awaken days to comeâŚ.
Cheers
Jim
thank you jimmy. i want you to browse my oyher postings also. i like to her from you -- rochishmonb
Hi Rochish,
What a breath taking poem, every word and every line is awakening to the tiered soul and the forgotten dreams. I feel like i want to blossom and flourish.Â
I love and share your deep yearning for a united humanity, never stop this pen from longing.Â
God bless
shirley
thanq Shirley.