Madness

Madness

These transitions will never end
for my inner state I canโ€™t amend
Frustration drives me into a corner
I hit my head against walls, Iโ€™ve become a mourner
Your absence kills, in my heart it creates storms
Yet it only beats for you, against all norms
Your face lightens me of my heavy loads
It dries my tears, my racing heart it slows
Now itโ€™s nowhere to be seen
To find it, I wander places I havenโ€™t been
Until I finally find that from the start
Youโ€™ve been living in the darkest corners of my heart

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Silent Dreamer

Thank you for the lovely comment and the appreciation!

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Tony Taylor

Hey DREAMER!!..... when you obsess over a lost love your mind can definitely take you to some pretty crazy places...... this is very well expressed poetic verse..... delivered with a fine sense of rhythm and timing!!.....ALL STARS!!..... well done dear poet sister!!.... and...... WELCOME to COSMO!!...... LOVE and ROCKETS!!.....T xo ๐Ÿ‘Œโœดโค

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Silent Dreamer

Aw such a lovely and deep comment! Thank you for taking the time to write it out so beautifully. And thank you for the warm welcome!! Much love and light! ๐Ÿ˜Š

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Silent Dreamer

You're too kind! I'm flattered and really appreciate your comments, thank you so much ๐Ÿ˜Š

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Silent Dreamer

Thank you so much for the lovely comment!๐Ÿ˜Šโœจ

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zoya

oww dear I totally understand that feelings. I pray to God that you heal soon and there will will a glory and shine will lighten up your heart that darkness will find no space to hide inside you. Amen! I totally love your poems. Please refer to my poems as well. and if you like it please share your views and like it. thank u sister for sucha amazing poem. keep writing<3

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Silent Dreamer

Thank you so much for your beautiful and thoughtful comment! I really appreciate it a lotโœจ๐Ÿ˜Š I'll def check out your page and poems!ย God bless you!ย 

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GREG TUCKER

I really enjoyed this and it was truly eloquently writtenย 

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Wendy Wass

Well done and congrats โ˜บ๏ธ

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Bipolar Mind

I love this!! You have a lot of talent! It was so deep I could feel your emotions!

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Silent Dreamer

Aw thatโ€™s so sweet! Thank you for your commentโ˜บ๏ธ

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Marion Price

Well done for winning!!ย  I'm a bit behind! Xx

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