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Neptune, The Saviour

Neptune, The Saviour

Oh, God of the living sea
Blue as an Angels eyes
Your dreams, artistry and empathy
carry me to the deepest skies

And with Salacia, your Queen and lover
And your brothers by your side
Jupiter and Pluto, the mighty twins
Over Heaven, you preside

And the earthly world and underworld
And all that is therein
With chariots of fire
You survey the realm within

Oh God of springs, rivers and waters
And the marriage of Heaven and Earth
Protect us from all that's evil
From that magical day of birth

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Cherie Sumner-Taylor

Hi Barry...Every planet and created thing has such reason and personality it make us feel so small in the scheme of things...and Neptune seems to be viewing it all in its position...Wonderful imagery.  I enjoyed. xo ;)

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Barry Childs

Thank you, Cherie. I thought I would try something different.
Barry x

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Gerard McGowan

Reads like an intergalactic prayer, very different but I love it.

Thanks for sharing.

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Barry Childs

Thank you, Gerard. I like the sound of 'intergalactic prayer'. That can be it's sub title.  Barry

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