Poem -
honey to sugar
had I not tasted the honey
I could settle for sugar
for you see
that is my problem
had you not set the bar
taken me as so far
into the pool of insanity
you see....
had I not felt every cell
vibrate to your presence
or my voice quiver
in euphoria and pleasance
had I not known
what it should be
you'd be and could be
how simple it would be..
from your warmth to cold ice
starry nights to twinkles
from honey with depth
to sugary sprinkles
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Glory be BB!!.....loved this......you are sprouting poetic wings my friend........this is a masterful display of formatting and timing............reads like a dream sweet poetess.......read aloud to my room mate.......his response was applause........not words............beautifully delivered sister girl.........miss you around here.......smiles..........TÂ xx
Thank you both. I've actually changed it since then...lol..I may edit.Â
xoxo
Ouch!.... a dagger to my poetic soul..........write on sister!!........hugs-n-smiles..........TÂ xx
I didn't like the original ending...changed it slightly...you probably won't even notice..let's see how perseverance you are...!Â
correction:Â perseverant I believe..lol....won't let me change it....apparently that's not even a word