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Pristine Bride

Pristine Bride

In the way he loves, she feels like a pristine bride
Caressed by his essence, snowflakes flutter inside
In white, she becomes a winter wonderland scene
Deep in melting thoughts with lit eyes of crystalline

Her heart thaws in his affection’s blanket of snow
In their winter frolic, snowdrifts of passion grow
One gentle snowflake kiss leads to a blizzard storm
Rapturous romance advances in sensual swarm

Snowcap peaks of emotions sprawl the laden land
She dances, carefree, honored to hold his hand
He whispers tranquil words for her love’s acquiesce
She twirls in excitement, showing off her wedding dress

Winds of change blow in the perfect lovers’ snowfall
She walks upon the snow, without feeling cold at all
While he adorns her with silky vows meant for life
Crystal flakes kiss her veil, announcing her as his wife

Promises pronounced, the snow whirls magically strewn
She drifts into wonder, eager for their honeymoon
He loves her like his treasure, and she glows with pride
Reveling in the pure love of a pristine bride
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Cherie Leigh

Hi Jamie...Thank you!Β  When I think of a bride, images of snow and purity in white come to mind...the joy and excitement that love exudes...I hoped to portray that in this write.Β  xo ;)

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Jamie Crawford

You certainly did portray that. I would appreciate it if you read my poem please.Β 

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Cherie Leigh

Oh sure!Β  I am so behind on Cosmo...and I miss a lot of writes...but I will certainly check out your work... ;)

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Cherie Leigh

Thank you, Lisa....I love the scene of snow falling...and had the idea of a woman in her wedding dress twirling in bliss....It just seems idealic...lolΒ  I am glad you liked it.Β  xo ;)

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Bill MacEachern

This is great Cherie, I can see her twirling Β in her blizzard of bliss...

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Cherie Leigh

Hi Bill...Thank you!Β  You got the idea I was trying to present....twirling and enjoying life, love, and the snowfall to capture her spirit...Than you for reading....I appreciate your kind support. xo ;)

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Larry Ran

My Dear Cherie,

His blizzard of affection flows
Her love for him, each day now grows
He blankets her with kisses pure
She responds to him, no more demure

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For their storms of ecstasy bring sheer delight
As they lay together in the night
She whispers softly, to him confide
You've made me feel like a "Pristine Bride"

All my love,
Larry xxx

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Cherie Leigh

Oh wow Larry!Β  Such romantic verses in reply.....They make me sigh because I know you got the heart of my emotional intent in this one....It is such a blessing to be read and understood with such sentimentality over my love poems.Β  Β Can't you just see a bride all in white prancing in the snow with joy?Β  That is the feeling I had while writing this one...Thank you, as always for such beautiful responses to my work...Means so much. Love to you and Linda....Have a Happy New Year!Β  xoΒ  ;)

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Larry Ran

My Dear Cherie,

Your beautiful love poems, overflow with such perfect passion, that, as I read each line, I ingest it, already formulating a response.Β  They are like looking in the mirror, for they are the reflection of all the love I feel for Linda.

All my love,
Larry xxx

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Cherie Leigh

Awww...That is such a sweet reply and honor!Β  Love surely does change one's whole perspective of life.Β  It is a universal feeling that connects us all, just as music does as well.Β  I am happy that what I write resonates with your heart. xo Love n Hugs

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Dmitri Rudder

You know, I'm really sorry I had to miss yours and Tony's wedding timeframe. I would really have loved to see what you came up with afterwards. I suppose I'll have to keeping moving backwards through your pieces until I get there...

What a shame.... *cough,cough* fingers behind back crossed.

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Cherie Leigh

Lol...We were married on September 8th and there are poems about it shortly after and right before....as I was definitely in that marital zone...lolΒ  xoΒ 

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