Poem - 26 August 2013, 11:18 Snow White Valentine Akiyama Beautiful in and out. With the smile of a broken angel. Skin as white as snow. Lying still encased in peaceful bliss . Red lips turned blue from deaths sweet kiss. Like 0 Pin it 0 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 1346 Rating: Total votes: 4 Tags: Death Depression Pain Sad Poetry Genre: Tragedy Drama 5 comments
Sayed Thangal03 September 2013, 20:16 though the poem is very short, it has the meaning of an epic. The purity of an innocent person is well depicted, good job. sayed Reply
Jimmy Arnold03 September 2013, 21:32 A poem of purity in deed Sayed and encrusted with feelings of true and a passionate delivery of lifes continuous presence, of wanting to live, even beyond the interludes of death...Very powerful poem.. Cheers, Jim Reply
Valentine Akiyama03 September 2013, 22:19 Thank you both very much. I appreciate the positive feedback. Reply
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though the poem is very short, it has the meaning of an epic. The purity of an innocent person is well depicted, good job.
sayed
A poem of purity in deed Sayed and encrusted with feelings of true and a passionate delivery of lifes continuous presence, of wanting to live, even beyond the interludes of death...Very powerful poem..
Cheers,
Jim
Thank you both very much. I appreciate the positive feedback.
You are quite welcome Hana..
Powerful piece! :)