Poem -
on the surface-Part II
I am torn about the meaning of friendship
so what is neighborly and what is kinship?
I am to have no expectations
my love is to be unconditional
to be numb with no sensation
like a dog with puppy love
the bones you throw
are not enough
it's only a game I finally see
shallow and self serving I foresee
friendship at the surface
of a flowing lake
don't be sorry
for it was my mistake....
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Hey BB!!.........good to see you around here...........I love the honesty in this write............the little intricacies of relationships are so easily misconstrued...........and it sounds like this is a very realization........I don't know if it's a true scenario or not...........regardless it's a fine piece..........compelling and well conveyed...........like the pic too (really added to the title)............well done girlfriend!!.........smiles........TÂ xx
Thanks Tony. This was the second part to another one I wrote...unfortunately, disappointment in some friends..the older I get, it seems like for most it's all about them. I disagree that all love should be unconditional. At the moment you do something for someone, of course you do it without expecting anything...but once the opportunity arises to do something nice for someone, that's when you are able to see who is truly a friend. It is what it is..thanks for reading..!! xoxo
BB
Thank you Flower Girl. I'm slowly, finally learning to accept that not everyone thinks like we do. When I wrote this I was highly disappointed at a couple of friends. But honestly, we have a choice to accept them for what they are or just walk away. It's like expecting the sky to be pink or something...it's just not possible...anyway, life is about coming from a place of love no matter what...and though challenging, I plan to practice it at all times..thanks for reading!!!