Poem -

ThE PerfecT nighTmaRe EnD

a perfect nightmare end.
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And Night Continues
grinning...

a most appropriate
End.

(to the days bad
Beginning.)

I'm always defeated
in these Wars!

(unless the Loss
of Self means
Winning)

My tears are lead,
pouring from A
Bullet
Riddled Heart...

shot down by A
Smile that Once
Raised
The Dead!

(only quickly to
depart.)
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and...
The Waves
Continue
Crashing...

(an appropriate
chorus for that
Shadow Laughing.)

I never Get
Life's Stupid
Joke!

knock knock..
Nobody's
There!!

(or asking.)

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and...
the Light continues
Sleeping...

Creating The Perfect
Nightmare End!

(to The Love that
I Was Dreaming.)

j.stephen.h.

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Marion Price

Like this very much Icarus, and I'm going to risk saying ( I think the brackets) diminish it, ...I don't know why you keep posting under nonsense ...it really is anything but...😊

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Icarus Flocke

Ty. Miss Price. And no worries ma'am. You're 
quite free to say anything you wish. And I value
the HONEST critiques you provide.

If a writer heeds criticism in the appropriate
Light, it serves to make him or her brighter as
an artist.

It's how we evolve .

Ty. Again!!

J.s.h.

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