Poem -

The Sea

The Sea

Raging
Waves
We’re
Underwater
Hands 
Intertwined 
Looking
In 
Each
Other’s
Eyes
Realizing 
We
Are
The stillness
In 
The sea
Kiss me
So
I can
Breathe

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Sparrowsong

Hello Lauren...

What happened?

​​​​​​Back to 1 write...

Great write!

​​Welcome back!

Your Man Scrambled Letters coming back too?

Best wishes and blessings!

Hugs...

sparrowsong

 

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Lauren Dorf

Thank you my sweet friend💗

Hugs xxx

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Penny

Beautiful piece. Loved reading this 

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charlotte

''' kiss me so i can breathe '' .. wow... powerful line ! nicely expressed lauren

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deano

Lovely Lauren <3

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Christopher Correia

beautiful poem Lauren, I must've read this a dozen times and it gets better, poetess, cheers

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Cherie Sumner

HI Lauren....This is soooo beautiful..In simple words you bring a serene sea scene of love...You go girl!  I am so inspired by your work!   Love n Hugs..xo 

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Fauxcroft

A masterpiece in ink, beautiful.

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Syd

Hi Lauren, beautiful poem. Hopefully one day I will be able to write so well. It's nice to see you back.

- Syd 

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Lauren Dorf

Why thank you Syd for your kind words!

Lauren🌼

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Tina

This was lovely to read. Its like beneath all the rough turmoil there is a quiet place where love belongs and is cherished.  Glad to see you are back writing here 😊. 

Tina x

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Lauren Dorf

Why thank you my friend!

☺️
Happy Valentine’s Day!

Lauren🌼

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Wayne Stubbs

Not a problem my friend! Happy Valentine's to you too 💓

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Lee Robbins

Cin, cin... Beautiful without being saccharine sweet..

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Lauren Dorf

Thank you for reading and commenting!

Much appreciated Lee☺️

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This is lovely, Lauren!

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Susan Chetcuti

I enjoyed this Lauren especially since I have written a few about the Ocean:)

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Lauren Dorf

Thank you for your kind words Susan💗

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