the surfer in the wave

Like 2 Pin it 0Where are all the birdsĀ
Where are all the trees
Where are all the children, Ā
The fish inĀ the seas?Ā
Where are all the lovers
And the men kindĀ
Are these all the worshippers
Inhabiting Gods'mind? Ā Ā
Where are all the celebrations
The joy of creation,Ā
Where are the slavesĀ
The servants and the brave
The surfer in the wave
ForĀ where,Ā
Where is the care to be foundĀ
For the sick and the despair-ing
The hymns we are singing
And the curses we are swearing
And theĀ ties that bindĀ
In Gods mind?Ā
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Where are all the birds
Where are all the trees
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Hey Jai, this has that apocalyptic feel to it. I like the way you structured this, and the title surfer in the wave, awesome brother.
Thank you Devon; well surfing is theĀ
metaphor and I hope it worked.Ā
Much apppp Jai :)
Wassup JAI MASTERS!!.......I agree with D!!........this does read like a post apocalyptic piece!!........a beautiful flow and sense of poetic timing........ delivered with VERY memorable images!!.......... you got it goin' on bro!!........... cool stuff!!............ Love and Rockets!!.......T xo
Good day TT
I can't remember when I wrote this
perhaps I was in the shower dreaming of surfing
that's not a visual you want to see right!!:)