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Traversing memoirs of love back to silence. ( Brevity writers challenge )

Traversing memoirs of love back to silence. ( Brevity writers challenge )

Nebulous to their
pestiferous inquisitions,
I’ve never sought
after happiness
through any lack
of nobility to procure
a benignant response.

this idea came from another writer by the pen name Stiletto quil a challenge I entered .
 

In 20 words give your response to
 The image presented only this image please .

, also you can use the music by Lisa Gerrard to help in your expression .

( A freestyle verse of metaphors )  
No rhymes please. 

NB: this is a shared idea , all claims to their rightful owners.

Challenge ends in ( 4 days) on Friday the 24th , I'll be posting the results

Drop the link in the comments and I will visit your page.( Helps me keep a record of all who participated 😊)

You can place your own title and in brackets along with the image above.
( Dblankportrait's brevity challenge

Thank you all for your participation 😉

Stay inspired beautiful souls ✍🎩

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Charu Shawd

https://cosmofunnel.com/poems/umbilical-tears-dblankportraits-brevity-challenge-151256

ty 🕊💕

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GREG TUCKER

https://cosmofunnel.com/poems/nobilitys-doula-dblankportraits-brevity-challenge-151261

TY Bro

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Wasn't expecting a maternal spin to it, so I am even more curious about entries ahead

Thank you for your participation Greg 🍻

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Lorris Morris

Can u break this down in simple terms....so I can understand...
I am getting kinda old and my brain....can only do so much.
Thanks 

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no worries just read it twice lol....

Just messing with you , what I'm asking is simple, look at the image and express your feeling about it in 20 words.

It' all good pal 😉

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Caron Swann

Through the mask,
the world is streaked with tears,
And the rain cries heavier than
my heart can ever sigh..
 

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Caron Swann

I've posted two, is this allowed?
Feel free to tell me off, if not allowed :-)
xxx
 

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Caron Swann

https://cosmofunnel.com/poems/mask-dblankportraits-brevity-challenge-151306

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Caron Swann

https://cosmofunnel.com/poems/lost-dblankportraits-brevity-challenge-151305

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Oh wow I just read the one you posted in the comments and already my heart is melting 🌼

I am eager to read the others , I shall be on your page in a bit . But in mind only one entry is needed.

I am honored by your participation in this challenge🌷💐

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Cherie Sumner-Taylor

https://cosmofunnel.com/poems/deprivation-of-desire-dblankportraits-brevity-poem-challenge-151341

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Cherie Sumner-Taylor

Everybody is doing a great job!  It makes me proud to be on this site and see all the talents at work when challenged...We are all so different and together create something awesome with each contribution....Fun! xo Thanks for this, Merrill. ;) 

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Oh yeah it's great to spice things up a bit and give everyone a chance to come together and appreciate each other's gifts , in humbleness and in the unity of love .

I honestly didn't expect such a turn out , I am buzzing , my heart is on fire reading the entries 😂😂

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Charu Shawd

So True what u said love 
huggs to everyone xx
i wish the whole world would connect one day the way we connect on Cosmo like one family.
please pray for World peace. 
🕊🌍🕊

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Thanks Greg , you're a true friend thank you for all the heartfelt encouragement you've been giving to all the participants.

​​​​​​You're awesome dude😉🍻

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Ian William

https://cosmofunnel.com/poems/Sanctuary-dblankportraits-brevity-challenge-151244

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deano

https://cosmofunnel.com/poems/unbound-dblankportraits-brevity-poem-challenge-151394

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Kathleen Tortolano

Awesome Write D
You inspired me.to write with a bit of a twist!
thank you for that!
enjoy your works immensely
https://cosmofunnel.com/poems/ice-queen-dblankportrait-challenge-inspired-151404

❤️️Kathleen  

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Tony Taylor

Thanx MERRILL!!.... your write is beyond clever...... I'm still smiling at the fact that you make fun of stuff and not many seem to notice........ your brilliance is in your approach to LIFE not just words...... you're a "Stranger in a strange land" which makes your words unbelievably compelling......thanx bro  for all you do for COSMO!!...... you're the light brother!!..... peace n stuff.......tony 😊👌

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Larry Ran

Dear Merrill,

Brilliant write!  Brilliant idea!  Brilliant man!

https://cosmofunnel.com/poems/dreams-of-yesterday-dblankportraits-brevity-challenge-151508

Love,
Larry xxx

 
 

 
 

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Greg Etsell

I want to to do this I hope to do something by Friday

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GREG TUCKER

https://cosmofunnel.com/poems/malibu-girl-seduces-brevity-dblankportraits-brevity-challenge-151551

I could not resist adding one with a twist of sarcastic comedy.  Hope you don't mind.

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Mia Terra

https://cosmofunnel.com/poems/brevity-writers-challenge-151593

Oops went over 20 words :(
I don't think I am good at this challenge. I talk to much....

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Wayne Stubbs

https://cosmofunnel.com/poems/hidden-dblankportraits-challenge-151609
I've posted one, I was wondering what this challenge was about, Tina reminded me to check it out, 
there is so many good ones, I'm afraid I think mine will be but a shadow,
hope you enjoy Db! 😊

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pauline codd

https://cosmofunnel.com/poems/dbportrait-brevity-challenge-151610.. Had a bash at the challenge.. Xx

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charlotte

https://cosmofunnel.com/poems/darkness-stands-by-her-side-dblanks-brevity-challenge-151614

sorry merril, i used the image below on the video, i got confused.. this probably does not qualify then ...

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