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WHIMSY BECKONED

WHIMSY BECKONED

She appears when Iโ€™m not looking
Catches me unawares
Maybe a weak moment
In some far off deep stare

Pulls at my heart strings
Creeps into my consciousness
A tap on memories shoulder
My First Love in a cotton dress

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Tony Taylor

Hi JOHN!!...... memories have an interesting way of popping up at the most opportune and synchronous moments.......I Love the simplicity with which you painted these words ~

ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย  ~ "A tap on memories shoulder
ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย  My first Love in a cotton dress"

Simple and yetย vividly STUNNING!!........ALL STARS!!...... you have an amazing touch dear poet brother!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo ๐Ÿงโœดโคโœด๐Ÿง

ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย 

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John DeFoore Jr

Ah my friend Tony
always a welcome and prized visitor.
so appreciative of your comment! I hope your music project is going well.
johnย 

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John DeFoore Jr

As time goes on,
Manyย memories tap.
heart strings frayย 
from tuggingย 

my choiceย 
to remember
sweetย 
or sad

most often now
i choose sweet,
your familiar name
and kind comments

Are a Sweet memoryย 
I now revisit often

thank you
john

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