Poem -
Whole Life
I just want
A deep dark hole,
I can dig it
Well come on myself
Let's go.
Don't want life
To touch me,
Don't want to feel
Shedding layers
Peel after peel.
No dreams
Just sleep
Down in the pits
Of the pitch black deep.
Pluck out the eyes
No need to see
All the horror
Awaiting me.
Take the ears
My hearings ignored,
There's no need
When you've heard it all before.
Bitten off tongue
I have sweet earth,
No need of a life so tasteless
When all there is to eat is dirt.
Cover my opening times a rot,
Waiting for the decomposing act,
I was given everything
Now I need to give it back.
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Comments
Mind blowing IÂ must say, the idea "I was given everything
                         Now I need to give it back."
Only one that has finally found that peace ,accomplished that purpose ,has mind power and control,in tune with existence, one that has done it all, lived through it all and conquered it all in life,one that has gained consciousness can say as you wrote.From my perspective.
I think this poem is beautiful in all senses, the concept alone is WOW!Â
Consious thinking.
PEPPER.
Devon- OMG, this is unbelievable, I mean outstanding, it kept me going, and I felt buried in the end, though life shed with the highest degree.........amazing!!!! GREAT JOB!!!
Nancy
Thank you all so much enjoyed your comment pepper never thought someone would in a sense say this poem was beautiful love it though. Nancy thanks for the support and Cherie i was going with a morbid theme even though i was in a bad place when i started it nothing to worry about but thanks again everyone fo the awesome comments and support.
I agree and yes completely cathartic i feel much better now