Poem -

Your Gift

Drifting through un-parallel space

Wondering why I waited so long

To come and enjoy this place

It was truly a waste.

Needs and wants consumed my life

Is it possible they still do?

It would cut me like a knife

If it still consumed my life

Life is just a daily task

Surviving. Like it was

Surviving was the last

The last restore we took as a task

Living is more of a gift

One you have to earn

You have to drop everything and shift

So you can proudly live as a gift

So drift through your space

Living as a gift

Don’t wait to long to visit this place

This amazing place we call space

When people tell me they miss the days

I wonder why they live in the past

With mistakes they made in their daze

What a horrible maze

Don’t just stop to smell the roses

Don’t just stop for one thing

Stop for everything that grows

Admire all of the roses

You cant go to fast in space

You cant control yourself

Not in this place

Space is a place with a mind of its own

So watch the constellations with admiration

They are your nightlights

The ones that tuck you into bed at night

Treat your nightlights with admiration

And as your drifting through space

Take one moment

Just a second to catch up to the place

An admire the lights in your space-place.

Where ever you drift

Enjoy the light

It always shines no matter where you shift

It shines as your gift.

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Russel James Mackie

wow, a poem about stars. I couldn't of said it better my self. but you just said it in poem. nicley written.

coodo's to you

signed Russ.

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Elora E

Russel Mackie

I understand why you would think of this as a poem about space. But space is just a metaphor used in my poem. It is a metaphor for our world. I wrote this piece after I recently moved. My world was in my old town but now i am seeing space (our world). Thank you for the compliments

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