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The Hunger-Revised (Part 5)

The Hunger-Revised (Part 5)

As Jade bent down to pick up her black lace dress, she felt nothing but embarrassment. She hurriedly dressed herself, and proceeded to walk out the door. "Jade!" Sebastian shouted, his voice echoing throughout the room. She stopped walking but didn't turn around. Fuming, Abigail bolted toward him and slapped him hard across his face. Then she said, "Let her go, Sebastian. She's tainted. . .she's a plague. . .forget about her." Jade knew that was her cue to leave. With tears filling her eyes, she stormed out, disappearing into the darkness of the night. 
"That was uncalled for, dear Abigail," Sebastian said without thinking. 
Abigail placed her index finger over his bloody mouth, and muttered, "Hush." Wisely, he complied. She then eyed him up and down, noticing the bite mark on his wrist. "Sebastian, what have you done?" 
". . .I think you already know the answer to that question, my dear Abigail."
Abigail slapped him again. "You fool!" Then she grabbed him by the neck; squeezing it tightly. "I should kill you. . .I should kill you right now," she added, menacingly.
Jade, meanwhile, was roaming the downtown streets of Los Angeles. She was distraught, terrified, and strangely, famished. But, it wasn't food that she was craving. . .she was craving the blood of a human. Instantly, questions began flooding her mind: What's happening to me? Am I a vampire? Panicking, she ran into a dark alley, and hid behind a large garbage bin. She then placed her hand against her chest, checking for a pulse. No pulse. "Well I'll be damned. . .I'm a friggin' vampire," she said to herself aloud. 
 

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A Lonely Journey

Silky, 
I love it! You're a wonderful writer. 
I'm really getting into the characters, and can't wait to see what happens next! (I think I just bit one of my co-workers, too! lol). Keep going! 
And I'll have you know, I really liked this series thing, so I started writing one, but I have no plot, or direction, or anything!! Oh my gosh! Thank God I don't have many followers, but I hope I don't lose my 2 nice ones! lol. 
Great writing, my friend! 

Hugs, 
Matthew. 
 

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Silkseduction

Ah, you always manage to put a smile on my face! Thank you for your sweet comments- means a lot to me. (sending big hugs your way) 

Your friend,
Lauren 
 

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A Lonely Journey

Hi Silky, 
I'm glad you're smiling, you deserve to be, you're a fine writer, and nice person. Hugs returned. 

Matthew. 

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Cherie Sumner-Taylor

HI Sis....Poor Jade...Not that it is any consolation now that she is a vampire, but I do think Sebastian has good intentions....well selfish intentions albeit, that he wants Jade to be his love....to have her in all ways.  Not sure what Abigail will do now in her jealous fit....I guess I will know soon...Great story going....You make vampires sexy!  Lol  xo sis C 

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