True rendition of a "Diamond poem" better known as shape poetry and very well constructed and with a very sincere meaning by the author.Do you write all of your poems in shape form, some are very hard to maintain their shape once placed on the web sites, although you had no problem at all with this wonderful one...Great job Bernd.. Art imitating poetry, imitating Art...
True rendition of a "Diamond poem" better known as shape poetry and very well constructed and with a very sincere meaning by the author.Do you write all of your poems in shape form, some are very hard to maintain their shape once placed on the web sites, although you had no problem at all with this wonderful one...Great job Bernd.. Art imitating poetry, imitating Art...
Wow thanks Jimmy!! Most of my poems are not shaped, a lot of them are, and all of them are songs or melodies hehe... I have to admit.... I'm actually not so very self-assured so I thought I might give this one 'a shot' and see what happens to the unknown eye. I'll be posting other poems later on which are not shape poetry, and I geuss I might also post some drawings or graphic designs next month. I find poetry an art. I just had to post this one for my first entry coz it's truly... my heart...
You are quite welcome in deed, and with it, you have opened your heart to us all on this site and we will be, humbly awaiting many more to come, along with your drawings and graphic designs....Again you did a great job with this shape poem, which is again stated, hard to keep their true shape...
True!! It's hard to keep the shape while still wanting to keep the
same meaning in the same order... This one I wrote for the most special
person ever in my life, so it was very much worth it. First I was afraid
and felt shame to that person, but am glad it got nominated and feel a
lot better, it's what I wanted, to get nominated and get opinions of
other artists. I don't think I deserve a place in top 3, I consider the
nomination and all the beautiful comments as a win... I'll be posting
more AND I'll be following you! xD
Good luck my friend
Thanks a bunch and don't ever sell yourself short, for your talent, is one only you can bring to the table and that was exactly what you did and Cosmo Funnel, just as we the readers and fellow artist, feel your chances of (1,2,3) is just as good, as all others on this site, so we congratulate you for your nominations and the Cosmo Gods, has spoken in your favor and Cosmo Funnel, remains fair and accurate to all.....
Lot's of people tell me that, geuss it's one of my weak points I can't get rid of.... You're right... And this is a great site, I'm new but already found lots of amazing 'creations', love it! Thx again, also for the boost in my self-assurance!!
I'll burn a candle and say a prayer to the Cosmo Gods for you xD
Comments
This is my heart
And soul of corzzz...
i love this !! that makes art and poetry as one and a different way of doing it tina x
Sweet !! Thx Tina it's a very huge compliment to me cause this one truly belongs to my heart & soul
x
you are so welcome bernd not often a piece like this comes up and a beautiful meaning behind it also
take care
tina x
Tears in my eyes... Also very thankful for whom I wrote it and who is in heaven now...
>>> I'll be following you !!
grz&hugz
Bernd
creative love it!
Thank you I love your poems as well !!
really? thank please comment on the one you like thanks!
your welcome
Yea!! But...Then I have to comment all of 'em?! hehe....
Good luck with your beautiful poem in the contest!!
lol i was talking about the one from this month thanks though!
hehe I already did xD
lol thank good luck to you on this month contest a well!
Thx & No pwoblemo sweet girl (who writes so very well at her age)!!
I'll add yours as favorite
aww thanks i already added your!
sweet !!
I find your poems also art Rachel!!
Thanks x
True rendition of a "Diamond poem" better known as shape poetry and very well constructed and with a very sincere meaning by the author.Do you write all of your poems in shape form, some are very hard to maintain their shape once placed on the web sites, although you had no problem at all with this wonderful one...Great job Bernd.. Art imitating poetry, imitating Art...
Kindest Regards,
Jim
True rendition of a "Diamond poem" better known as shape poetry and very well constructed and with a very sincere meaning by the author.Do you write all of your poems in shape form, some are very hard to maintain their shape once placed on the web sites, although you had no problem at all with this wonderful one...Great job Bernd.. Art imitating poetry, imitating Art...
Kindest Regards,
Jim
Wow thanks Jimmy!! Most of my poems are not shaped, a lot of them are, and all of them are songs or melodies hehe... I have to admit.... I'm actually not so very self-assured so I thought I might give this one 'a shot' and see what happens to the unknown eye. I'll be posting other poems later on which are not shape poetry, and I geuss I might also post some drawings or graphic designs next month. I find poetry an art. I just had to post this one for my first entry coz it's truly... my heart...
grz
Bernd
You are quite welcome in deed, and with it, you have opened your heart to us all on this site and we will be, humbly awaiting many more to come, along with your drawings and graphic designs....Again you did a great job with this shape poem, which is again stated, hard to keep their true shape...
Cheers,
Jimmy.
True!! It's hard to keep the shape while still wanting to keep the
same meaning in the same order... This one I wrote for the most special
person ever in my life, so it was very much worth it. First I was afraid
and felt shame to that person, but am glad it got nominated and feel a
lot better, it's what I wanted, to get nominated and get opinions of
other artists. I don't think I deserve a place in top 3, I consider the
nomination and all the beautiful comments as a win... I'll be posting
more AND I'll be following you! xD
Good luck my friend
Bernd
Thanks a bunch and don't ever sell yourself short, for your talent, is one only you can bring to the table and that was exactly what you did and Cosmo Funnel, just as we the readers and fellow artist, feel your chances of (1,2,3) is just as good, as all others on this site, so we congratulate you for your nominations and the Cosmo Gods, has spoken in your favor and Cosmo Funnel, remains fair and accurate to all.....
Great Job,
Jim
Lot's of people tell me that, geuss it's one of my weak points I can't get rid of.... You're right... And this is a great site, I'm new but already found lots of amazing 'creations', love it! Thx again, also for the boost in my self-assurance!!
I'll burn a candle and say a prayer to the Cosmo Gods for you xD
Good luck
Bernd
Take Care,,
Jim
wow this is amazing !! my diamond got 4k views !! Never expected this for my first post...
Fanks everyone !! <3