The dragons brush-with story

This original piece goes with a story i wrote entirely in haiku's
some of my fans might recognize one of them
"the dragons brush"
Wind whistles on us
sadly softly humming now
Birds chirp unaware
pride is mans folly
Betrayal is beyond them
birds do not need it
You stand before me
Brother, soldier, enemy
And our blades are drawn
You are the dragon
I never feared as all should
you, mighty brother
Me, a man, no more
betrayed the dragons honor
mine, a losers sword
But You have called me
and as my steps wait for yours
My heart cries a beat
War was never mine
A painter of love and life
Your strokes only death
Steps shake the grasses
And I swear, your blade was not
meant to move so fast
My skin screams as bones
but not so loud as our hearts
My hands hardly move
My body shakes grass
Our tears water them today
i reach for your hand
I grip your fingers
To touch the strings of your mind
And feel what you think
What you think of me
oh brother, i softly die
do you think of me

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Comments
That's really good, I like the flow and depth of this :)
Your drawing is really good too!
Thank you jennifer :)
Poem is excellent. Saw the drawing, like the fact the killing blow is so close. The arm being where it is makes you almost put yourself in the others place. Best part is the black emoitionless eyes. Definitely not thinking of you as you die...
Phillip
thank you for that :) im quite proud of it all in all and im glad you enjoyed it