Poem -
It’s All in the Way that She Eddies and Flows
Since like a river, you eddy and flow
I find myself looking
for somewhere or something
or somewhere to go ..
In the meantime however, I listen
and I feel for you
in the dark of the night and
the gold of each new day with you ..
Don’t expect me to wait tho’ till the
floods come around again ..
When that moment is gone there’ll be
no turning back on my keel again ..
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Comments
Hey Sir NEVILLE!!......what I find most clever about this is the beautifully subtle interchangeability of the main theme.....either you truly love a river nearby...or a woman who's moodiness is attractively powerful (smiles)....either way this is another gem!!.......ALL STARS!!.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xo : )
Thanks a bundle Tony .. Your visits are invariably very much appreciated sir :)
Hey Nev, I reckon Tony has summed this up perfectly....but me ...I wonder ...are humans the turbulent river or the eternally bobbing boat...cos humans, boats and bobbing rivers are on my mind a lot lately. Do not try to make sense of this comment and hope to remain sane, what I really mean is ...great write x
of course, a gentleman neva tells but I'm gonna make an exception and thank you regardless ............. many thank you's you .. x
I love the ebb and flow of this moving write!...........................................Jim
thank you kindly Jim .. muchly appreciated and then some sir ... N :)
Awsome poem
Thank you kindly Greg