Poem -
Pig Iron
Stale Life
Like 5 Pin it 2Grayscale life
Stale cardboard bread
Lonely nights and years
In a barren double bed
ΒPenicillin dust
Lines a heavy chest
Cholesterol, palpitations
Lipid level function testsMorose Mondays
Robotic ragemes
Jaundiced skin
Decaying dreamsΒMildew eyeballsΒ
Cast a sour stare
Piercing the haze
Of electric blue airCreaking joints
Fading looks
Granet heels carved from
Ill fitting safety bootsWith cold clay
A soul was environedΒ
Forging rhymes
From cold pig iron
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Comments
wonderful write my friend
Thank you so much Lisa xo
wow syd! powerful ....................................................................................Jim
Thank you Jim.
Much appreciatedΒ - SydΒ
This is friggin' Brilliant SYD!!....painting the aged greyness of life's offerings with powerful imagery and unbelievably well chosen words to create powerfully memorable phrasing....I often wonder where you come up with these thoughts of yours.....PINNED!!.....beautifully crafted my friend!!....LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xoΒ : )
Thank you so much for your kind comment Tony. As you know I'm not good at leaving constructive meaningful comments myself...I find it hard enough to write. My thoughts are often like an open diary....that's where my sporadic inspiration comes from and its also why I use an alias.
Thanks for stopping by my page. You're comments are always greatly appreciated.
Love and rocketsΒ - Syd xoΒ
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Wow this is indeed a very powerful write. Makes you think...you have captured it so well.in rhyme! Ssoo pinned! Pxxx
Thank you so much Pratibha. I appreciate your kind comment.
Best wishesΒ - Syd xoΒ
Woah you've summed up life with pills and medications in an awesome wry poem. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem tooΒ