A single tear

A single tenderÂ
timid tearÂ
 trickling Â
down my pailÂ
pain painted face .
Leading it’sÂ
pleading sulking serenade .
Which reflectsÂ
 back to meÂ
a bitterÂ
burning memory .
Of when ourÂ
love like a doveÂ
 flew into theÂ
saddened seaÂ
of fantasy.

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Comments
Love the leading line so very much!
WOW!! EDWARD!!....Fantastic use of alliteration here!!.....which in turn has made for some VERY compelling phrasing and a kind of romantic longing that I have not seen/read here on Cosmo for quite some time!!.....The heartbreak is so well conveyed that I wish I could give this piece more than just 5 Stars!!.......Well conceived and BEAUTIFULLY delivered!!......ALL STARS!! & PINNED!!.....Bravo dear poet brother!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xo : )
PS. great choice with the Sinatra tune!!