Poem -
Shades Of Eternity
One day perhaps
When I am possibly dead
Then I'd like to be lilac, I am not
fussed on blue
And let it be said here
That I don't think there's more
When we die we are dead
No more life...A closed door
However...
Should there be something
I suppose a god might be too,
And should you exist god, then
it'll be up to you so,
If rainbows exist...mind I don't
think they do
Then I'd like to be lilac
If that's alright with you
M P 10/7/22
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see you in the spirit world Marion! and the shades of colour will just keep coming, and so will all the family members! HUGS!....................................Jim
Aw...I hope so Jim...tell them to have a cuppa ready for me when I get there x
Hi Marrion
very wistful write its almost quite sad I think
Jude
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Thanks Jude š
Very relatable as Iām sure many others battle with what to believe (including myself)ā¦ including myself. You ended it wishfully, I thought that was clever and inspiring. ~Rob
Thanks so much Rob š
A very clever write!
Lines of assertiveness -
"I don't think there's more
When we die we are dead
No more life..."
However, there's other lines that suggest, maybe, not all is as clearcut decided as the above picked out line suggests.Ā For example ā
"Should there be something
I suppose a god might be too,
And should you exist god ..."
Lilac is a good colour!!Ā
Love the poem, pinned x
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You already know the inner workings of my true heart Tina, all I do on here is explore all possibilities ...and they are bloody endless lol...thanks love xx
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