Poem -
Just A Sky
oh star,
please please believe me
when i say i really care
i long to know your purpose
as i stand down here and stare
i search about in lords and gods
to find the reasons why
but every night you still are just
A star in just a sky
M ~
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Hello Marion...
This might sound silly...
I hope it doesn't...
There's a Star adoption...
I forget how much they charge?
I think you get an adoption certificate...
Why not pick a Star and name it?
It's there as a free gift...
Without a certificate...
It's not always come out in the same place...
But, I pick one and say...
Please pass it on to mine...
Thank you very much...
We can pass messages to each other...
On the next really starry night...
I will pick one and I will call it Marion...
It would be like a Message pigeon...
But, it would just be a star...
Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
sparrowsong
Some friends purchased a star for him and turns out it's in the vicinity of pisces, my star sign...I took a lot of comfort from that coincidence x
Ahh Marion this is filled with wonderment..I really love this
made me want to go and look at the stars...its too blinking windy and cloudy tonight
Lorna xx
Thanks so much for your kind words Lorna...so sorry for late reply x
This is quite good. Thanks for sharing.
Thankyou x
The ending has a real punch to it, don't it. Just like I think all poems should.
Thanks Rory x
I look at the sky often. In summer I lie on the beach at night and wait for shooting stars. You inspired something in me. Thank you
I love night best of all...I'm a dark person.lol...thanks so much Sharon x
Marion, this is such a simple and yet a powerful poem. I think we all spend more than a little time looking up at the stars and wishing or wondering x