Poem - 02 February 2024, 15:06 Welcome The Wind Marion only a wind comes now welcome the wind to blow itself off silent lands sweeping through the sins and harm now done, Welcome the wind. M ~ Like 7 Pin it 3 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 1047 Rating: Total votes: 7 Poetry Genre: Freestyle 11 comments
Jim "The Lad" ....02 February 2024, 20:00 someone has to make a choice to shake them off first! really cool write Marion!...................................................................Jim Reply
Being Me03 February 2024, 07:35 The wind can also blow the cobwebs away! How are you, Marion? your words never fail to reach deep places within heart and soul x Reply
Marion07 February 2024, 07:26 I imagine the wind, roaming across our dead world...just like it does on Mars. This image comforts me when I worry about the price of bread 😀😁😆 x Reply
N.J. Tomcatx06 February 2024, 15:39 Excellent! A beautiful, eloquent, tightly written, deep poem that expresses a lot in ~25 words. Reply
Neville07 February 2024, 10:37 a sobering thought indeed but otherwise a delightful little un our Marion x Reply
Marion25 February 2024, 03:29 Just a matter of time really...hopefully we won't be around to see it...scrap that...stupid comment...nobody will. thanks Nev, sorry for late reply X Reply
Marion25 February 2024, 03:30 Yes...exactly...a sigh if relief no doubt. Thanks John...sorry for late reply x Reply
Shaun Cronick01 March 2024, 13:41 Marion, hope St David's Day went well for you, whatever way the wind deems. Hope all is well and Hugs to you. Welsh hugs..the best :) xx Reply
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someone has to make a choice to shake them off first! really cool write Marion!...................................................................Jim
Thankyou Jim x
The wind can also blow the cobwebs away! How are you, Marion? your words never fail to reach deep places within heart and soul x
I imagine the wind, roaming across our dead world...just like it does on Mars.
This image comforts me when I worry about the price of bread 😀😁😆 x
Excellent! A beautiful, eloquent, tightly written, deep poem that expresses a lot in ~25 words.
Thanks so much NJ x
a sobering thought indeed but otherwise a delightful little un our Marion x
Just a matter of time really...hopefully we won't be around to see it...scrap that...stupid comment...nobody will.
thanks Nev, sorry for late reply X
The breath of Gaia❤️
Yes...exactly...a sigh if relief no doubt.
Thanks John...sorry for late reply x
Marion, hope St David's Day went well for you, whatever way the wind deems.
Hope all is well and Hugs to you.
Welsh hugs..the best :) xx