Poem -
On The Dog
This morning. The rain.
poured mercilessly
On the dog.
wet paw prints
All through. The milk.
Had gone sour
the cereal stale.
the shower rained hailstones
the day felt all wrong. And.
on top of all that. You.
were gone.
You're. Still. Gone.
M ~
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Thankyou Rory...hugs back x
This day in the life is so fucking real and so sad .. As a stand alone poem, I am almost ashamed to emphasise the fact that I liked it so effin much xx
Ah, sadly it is but a day in the life of every one of us Nev...sooner or later and often ...time and time again. I'm chuffed ( welsh for pleased 🤩) that you liked it and also a little sad too. Hugs lovely man X
Having read this I feel I want to be standing on your doorstep (albeit dripping wet) with a fresh couple of pints of milk, some boxes of cereal, a mop and bucket, a towel to dry up and a bunch of daffs. (Oh, and a cake too ... I nearly forgot the bloody cake). This little poem really reaches the heart x
I'll be expecting you then...fresh cream ok. 😊
thanks so much lovely lady xx
Great writing: very effectively conveys a sense of loss & a sad mood. And a great closing line/stanza.
Thankyou NJ....appreciated x