Poem -
gently swirled + foamy snowed
How quickly
Does
The bathwater
Really
Want
To flow
Away to scum
The drainpipes
In
The systems
Down below
I sometimes watch its beauty
Gently swirled
And foamy snowed
And wonder why
Such comfort to
The pits of hell must go
M ~
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It's the small things for me, M. One needs a keen eye for the imperceptible. I find it's what makes up The waking life.
Agreed. 😊
Thought as much
Funny I should wonder along much the same swirly lines myself .. Its harder to read between them tho' .. innit :) x
You know what I like about poetry Nev...or creative writing as I prefer to call it, nobody can tell you not to. Free range over any subject in the world, its probably the only thing left in this god awful world that is free and unvetted.
Also...every moment ends...forever, eternally and on repeat. Even a nice creamy foamy bath. Everything ends.
Pointless. Hugs X