Poem -

sitting in bowls

Seemingly
all the oranges sat askewed.
A little oldĀ  Ā  Ā A little withered
tad too stale and... oh so blue,
Stolen

from majestic treesĀ 
to sit in bowls
for you and thee
Seems

now they weren't for eating being
Past some sell by date, but who
can tell
when things get dumped
As if they're only waste and,
Seemingly

and old she was and so stale and
as wrinkled as old time
but oh just like those oranges
herĀ inner pip was fine
And

seems they came together
to know freshness
Deep inside
Shame to write a thing off
till,

You know where treasures hide.

M ~

Ā 

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sparrowsong

Hello Marion...

Bowls are good for fingers and small things?

People in hot tubs look like they're all missing a spoon...

I was nice...

I left out the crackers...

Some like Rye some like Grain...

Great write!

Thank you for sharing...

sparrowsong

Ā 

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Marion

I always enjoy your feedback SS...nobody does it like you...thanks love x

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Derani Blackburn

Marion, so beautifully descriptive and sparks the imagination like watching a movie.Ā  Great write xxx

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Marion

Oh thankyou so much Derani...beautiful name x

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Being Me

OMG!Ā  Love, love, love, love, love this one!

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Marion

You made my day...it's always lush to see you on here Tina xx

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Neville

there is so much truth here .. sometimes it takes a little squeeze to set it free x

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Marion

Exactly ...and oranges are always blue. Hugs X

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Neville

Sounds a bit similar to those Diamond Hard Blue Apples of The MoonĀ the Nice sang about yonks ago .. and that coincidentally,
I was listening to only yesterday x

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Marion

Were you lol. Musically not as good as Foyd Genesis or Bowie etc...but you got to love those crazy lyrics of the 60's haven't you. Seems everybody only ever writes about love these days...the ultimate illusion. ( between men and women)
I really would be interested to know if the same couples fell in love with each other... if they had only ever met blindfolded.Ā  x
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Marion

Just as I thought...and from an expert too šŸ™ƒšŸ™‚šŸ˜Š

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