Poem -

a tinkling

Whilst still alone. 
Aloneness spoke
Though not one soul.
was there....no joke

Vibrations from the windy
Grass.  A tinkling.
in the chimes of glass
​A shushing from
The moving clouds, the
Sunshine laughing. Quite.
Quite loud.

And still alone. Aloneness came.
It walked about. A silly game.
Whilst all alone. Aloneness.
spoke, and no one there. Not.
one... no joke.

M ~
 

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Terry Reeves

Hi Marion,
A tinkling - you are not alone,
I am with you.
Love,
Terry.
xoxo :)
 

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Marion

Bless you Terry...thankyou x

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Syd

Great poem Marion.
I love the imagery.

-Syd xo 

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Marion

Hey Syd...Good to see you on here again...thankyou...I'll keep an eye out for your next post x

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Syd

You're very welcome Marion. It's good to be back. I've been struggling with my writing lately xo 

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Nine Eleven

No one will ever understand what goes on inside, even our best poetry will never make anyone understand,  this is the sad part.
destined to alone.

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Marion

Again, sorry for late reply. Of late I feel that aloneness in my soul...like you...
but we can share that too. We can share the aloneness ...it helps I find. Thankyou for your soulful comment my friend x

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