Poem -
Oh My God
Don't be afraid
she most silently said
There is nothing to do
At the end
but be dead
Do not try then to rise
for the gods in the sky
are illusion and fake
and it's best you don't
Wake
Up to know
M ~
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Comments
Hello Marion...
So true...
If they're not sleeping they'd probably just be in the way...
Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
sparrowsong
Ha you made me smile again lol...in the way yea...get out the bloody way god I want to get into heaven!! 😆😆 thanks S x
Hello Marion, this flows really softly with such a sad tone, it makes you re read the words over to capture it again
Brilliantly done
lorna xxx
Ha...I do tempt them don't I...the gods...that's because I'm hoping they'll pop down in defiance and show themselves and I won't have to worry any more. Thanks so much Lorna your comment is more than kind...hugs x
It’s possible it’s a one and done. But no one really knows. Best to live the best life you can. Writing great verse as you do is a good way…
Oh ..I.like that John, great line.
'A one and done' ...there's a poem there!
Thankyou for your very kind comment...hugs x
Wow dearest Marion Kudos. 🌹
Thankyou lovely Shirley x