Poem -
Blue Hymn
Dusty road
Empty wind blows to nowhere
Sunshine blisters the silence
Into the valley of lost souls
Eyes of an oasis
Capture dreams not yet dreamed
In the midnight garden
Moonlight raptures the sleeping
Praying to the northern star
A skyline hallelujah
At the crossroads of confusion
Choir of the bluebird
Find the hymn to be heard
Unbind the chains that imprison
For the compass of this church
Is finally found
Fly with me
Bluebird symphony
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Comments
I'm blown away. What a fantastic poem. I think im gonna come back to this one in the future. What a write!
Thank you very much, appreciate it those words.
Wow!! Twistoftroy!!......what a powerful and creative piece of dark poetic prose......some excellent phrasing running throughout this piece ~
~ "Sunshine blisters the silence
Into the valley of lost souls
Eyes of an oasis
Capture dreams not yet dreamed..."
Truly memorable phrasing and imagery blossom from this write!!.......ALL STARS & PINNED!!.....Great work dear poet brother!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo : )
So glad you connected to my words. I love strong imagery and try to paint words like a small movie. Thank you for such a great review.
I am reading poetry and came across to this one just now. The 3 first lines captured my attention, and when I got to the end, the poem captured my heart. Happy writings to you Twistoftroy. B