Poem -
melodic in thirst
The two feathers fell quite
Melodic in thirst for the
Twirling and curling unknowing
Of earth, not of landings
or purpose, creation or birth
Just delighting in free fall so light
in the flight from
a chicken that hung
upside down way above
dead eyed and mangled and
knowing no love
In its death
M ~
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Hello Marion...
How can people be thirsty when they can buy Water in a Box?
It's hard to be thirsty when you have a promise in your heart...
Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
sparrowsong
Thankyou S...I bet if you' tried to sell water in a box somebody would buy it lol..😁.x
This is simply stunning, Marion!
I love the lines about the feathers. You have a keen eye and an amazing imagination. I have to give you 5 stars and a big hug.
But no pin? 🤨
Ah...you are too kind... and I love it 😁😁
Thanks Bernadete ...hugs x
Ah...might have posted thanks in wrong space Bernadete...hope you get it x
A pin
And I am going to treasure it my friend
thanks R x
Hey Rory, how have you been?
No pin because I don't pin. Otherwise I would pin this lady. Twice!
Stay well ! be good! not too good, just a bit.
As you always do dear Marion, you shock with your honesty and imagery and that my friend is why you are a top poet. Marvelous eye opening too
🌹
Shirley coming from you that is a huge and treasured compliment...thankyou x
OMG! This one makes for teary eyes. The contrast between the feathers (who doesn't pick up or look at a feather, with a loving smile?) And the chickens, slaughtered on a grisly conveyor belt. Ohhhh ...brilliant writing xx
Yes...there are always different ways to look at everything aren't there. Hopefully the feathers you find are from the squabbling seagulls overhead instead 😊 Seriously, I can't thank you enough fir taking the time to read my rants and moans Tina...so appreciated xx