Poem -
on these waters
Tis a strange place
To be
to find oneself
The living back there
on a cusp of that land
the dead up on stars
ever reaching down hands
we on the waters
with struggling breath
Alive in the drowning
Alive in these deaths
which are not
Apart and Apart and not knowing
a place where a sun once more
shines where some god finds
enough grace
to help
M ~
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Powerful writing Marion.
I hope you are well - Syd xo
Hi Syd, they say we are either alive or we are dead... nobody mentions the third state of existence do they. Truly appreciated X
A truly stunning philosophy, which is worse? Your imagery is superb. 🌹
Thankyou as ever my lovely friend X
"tis a strange place ..."
What a line to draw in your reader! You just know that something profound is coming. And it does come.
"The dead up on stars ever reaching down hands ..."
"we on the waters
with struggling breath
Alive in the drowning
Alive in these deaths ..."
Fantastic. You always grab your reader and feed them delicious words. Your poetry is sublime xx
Thankyou so much Tina...your comments are beautiful. Did you see Matthew back on? We are going to have some ridiculous contests now like we used to and you've no excuse OK...you've got to do one 🤩xx
Youre welcome!
Hahaha...yes! Great to see Matthew back on here!
Where's Neville gone?
I think he said he was away for a while x
Ahhhhh! 👍
Cosmo contest winner of the year
Oh wow... have I won?
ah shit...nah...
For your lovely( if misleading😆) comment R... I award you...🤩🤩🤩
( cos I'm.brave and you're worth it 😊)
x
Hello Marion...
Have you heard the Song Never Been To Me?
We can find some answers for ourselves...
Some answers will always be a Mystery...
On your Life's Path...
Not all treasure is Shiny...
If it glows like a Nose...
Chances are...
If it doesn't...
Be safe...
You could trip...
I know I'm not the only one...
Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
S x
Ah bless you S...massive hugs x
Understatedly beautiful and powerful.<3
Thanks so much Brittany...hugs x
Your pain brings the most beautiful words from your lips, dear Marion. It takes courage. And you have plenty to teach all of us. A warm hug, B
I can definitely teach you how to make a good bread pudding but that's about it lol. Thankyou as ever for your beautiful comment B X