Poem -
six again... or something
As it happens
I don't feel stupidĀ
On a swing in a dark park
on a dark road with a dark heart
And moon
even as rain comes
I don't give inĀ
I embrace the tears
It's not a sinĀ Ā
just to beĀ
just a meĀ Ā
in the dark
in a parkĀ Ā Ā Ā
on a swingĀ Ā
in the rain
getting wet
as it happens
M ~
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No, don't feel silly, there is an immense beauty in the embrace. B
The motion of swinging is such a comfort...maybe because we are neither one place or another, thank B x
Marion, your pain is so intense, and so beautifully expressed. Please know we all love you, Kiddo. Great writing, right off the cuff. ā¤ļø M.
Ah lovely man.. I don't write for sympathy honest, not needed. Writing just attempts to make sense of my mad head lol. It never does so I have to keep inflicting. Sorry. Thankyou truly my friend... I will be back later to catch up with yours x
Not only does this remind me of me, it reminds me of home too.Ā
just (a) meĀ Ā ........ Maybe a typo? my dear friend, just curious because I love your work and without the a it flows even better . ā¤ļøĀ
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Ha no love... I'm just odd...I likeĀ to detach from myself sometimes or just chuck an 'a' or an 'and'Ā in inappropriate places lol. Hugs X
lol fabulous just keep being you. š¹Ā
I love this. I get it, I do. Hugs x
Don't think we ever grow out of swings Tina even though they outgrow us lolĀ thankyou x