Poem -
thumb print. Of a moon.
could've asked god
to join me
Down on the shore
where waves
crashed and pounded
the sand. right before.
My dry shoes
~~~~~~~~~
Where night curled
the fading
thumb print
Of a moon
and wind
Unleashed torments
and wailings
And. Doom.
And
could've asked god
I suppose.
M ~
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Hello M...
It's probably good you didn't ask...
God has a sense of humor...
Chances are your shoes would have been wet...
I really don't want to think it only happens to me...
Sometimes, I feel like I'm in a One Person Club...
Then someone comes a long and tells me nope as they shake off their shoes...
Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
S x
You are never a One Person Club on here my friend. Thanks S x
Well I'm here and I'd love to be friends! I just started posting my content last night. But I went ahead and gave you a follow and once I have some actual free time I'm going to come back and read some more of your work cuz that was amazing great job! Feel free to follow me if you want like I say I'm very new here so I'd love to be able to make friends and share content with each other!Â
Hello Charles, so nice to see you here. Thankyou for reading my work...I'm already following you and believe i voted and commented on your work which should come through on an email to you. If you press the enlarged cosmofunnel at top of your page it will take you to main page where you will find all the poets on cosmo and their work for you to read and vote. I hope you make many friends on here x
M, anything to do with God is so ominous.Â
It is that's why it fascinates me... thanks R x
You, the waves and the moon.Â
Questions but no answers. Â I wish you a peaceful heat tonight.Â
Love, BÂ
Thankyou B... you too x
Ooooh...as beautiful as it is, this has gone very dark undertones. Thankfully you didn't ask God to join you! Like Sparrowsong says ...yours shoes would've got wet x
Lol... quite right. ...wet shoes. Thankyou Tina... hope all is well with you and yours... hugs X
I hope you got my thanks Tina... my email is playing up recently for cismo. Hope you are well ... hugs X
Hey! I'm good thankyou. Well, okay. Ish. But hey, isn't it the same for us all? Being Okay ISH, okay being the huge grey area from just hanging on to I think I can do this. Lol.
How are you?
I am just about to pop over to read what else you've written lately. I do love your work xx
I'm glad you're OK... even if it is...ISH lol. And you can do it girl... you know you can. Thankyou so much for taking the time Tina...it is really really appreciated... hope you know that...hugs xx
Hugs back 🤗 xx
Ah this is stunning. You and I are most certainly in the same club 💙 beautiful work dearest Marion. 🌹
Thanks love x
there is little warmth here yet I feel no sense of anything missing .. more a resistance to accept what isn't .. yet when I look at it another way .. it briefly reads and looks rather more inviting .. indeed, beautiful x